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Old 06-01-03, 07:46 PM   #1
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[The White Lady Smacked Me] ...written by [YWG]

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I'm growing a habit.. no one understands it.. rolling with acid ..
I yearn to breathe free..fuck it.. I'm croaking, I've had it ..
I'm knowing I'm stagnant.. I need high.. cuz the lows being savage ..
In the corner of the airport.. hoping they'll lose my emotional baggage ..
I've learned tunes, play the world's smallest violin since I turned loon..
Cloudy images of my future.. blackened and forever gone in a burnt spoon ..
The last dream of a crack fiend.. the damn world is finally past me..
I asked for one last high..and this time the white lady smacked me..

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Old 06-01-03, 08:20 PM   #2
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^NICE seems more poetic form but nice contend....love the rest but short

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Old 06-01-03, 08:22 PM   #3
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nice piece true enough well written, but short..... keep spittin
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Old 06-01-03, 09:03 PM   #4
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Word up .. this is about cocaine if you didn't know.
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Old 06-01-03, 09:06 PM   #5
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lol hell i knew and so did every1 else dawg,,, still makes it to short na mean was iight tho
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Old 06-01-03, 09:38 PM   #6
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this was ill, nice imagery,nice wordplay, it flowed smooth,and nice topic, keep spittin this ill shit.peace kidd
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Old 06-01-03, 10:33 PM   #7
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No Doubt.
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Old 06-01-03, 10:35 PM   #8
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this is nice but you should finish it. no since in posting somethign 8 lines long
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Old 06-01-03, 10:44 PM   #9
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Its finished.

Read the last line
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