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06-01-03, 04:38 PM | #1 | |||
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Fortune Tellers..Sand 'N' Vortex
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Were the prophets of age,
a union of immortality Sent to predict the fallacy that shall befall your galaxy. Years from now, a meteorite shall collide with Earth Mankind will become extinct, as the oceans subside the world. Cities will be destroyed by tyranic waves of Chlorine as humanity bears witness to Mother Natures fury. With the world underwater, and greenest landscapes eaten, this shall provide God with a second shot at his garden of Eden Mankind messed his world up, so he figured things needed to change, Gave monkeys voices, and placed us bottom of the food chain. . to learn and master ways around a new game, run through shame and hide from what we previosly killed its confusing the ways the wont's collide and intersect god's shallow will, is it a switch up in plans for the kind of man that he mangles within his hands, or is it a plan the kind he always has that will eventually make the life grand we try but cant understand, i tried and only saw lies "oh please god!" fear trickled like water from every thought please stop i screamed what the heck is this, and i slammed the crystal ball to the concrete letting vision slide into emptiness...
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06-01-03, 06:41 PM | #2 | |||||||
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This was Ill..........But I didnt see Vortex's verse
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06-01-03, 09:23 PM | #3 | |||
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It's all mixed together...
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06-01-03, 09:28 PM | #4 | |||
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ooooooooooooo but it was tight
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06-01-03, 11:11 PM | #5 | |||
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that was really cool...the short lines had me all messed up, it was kinda weird...I liked it though.
The role reversal was good, I've often thought about what it would be like to me killed by a huge mouse. I'd like to hear an audio of this, it would be dope. Peace
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06-02-03, 03:56 AM | #6 | |||||||
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^ Should be one to consider when i have CEP figured out.
Nice verse anyways Sand, not a bad collab really given the time you took. Peace! |
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06-03-03, 10:23 PM | #7 | |||||||
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^Upping!
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06-04-03, 04:10 AM | #8 | ||||||
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i liked this peice alota
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06-04-03, 05:47 AM | #9 | ||||||
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very nicely witten,another good topic form both of you,good likes throughout,the moneky voice ine was good,concrete lettin gvision slid einto emptiness,very nicely ended..nice words from both of you,limking the mixing of verses idea,works well with the right writers...very nicely done,good work both yall...shits a thinker no doubt.
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06-04-03, 08:03 AM | #10 | |||||||
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For the confused. .
Were the prophets of age, a union of immortality Sent to predict the fallacy that shall befall your galaxy. Years from now, a meteorite shall collide with Earth Mankind will become extinct, as the oceans subside the world. Cities will be destroyed by tyranic waves of Chlorine as humanity bears witness to Mother Natures fury. With the world underwater, and greenest landscapes eaten, this shall provide God with a second shot at his garden of Eden Mankind messed his world up, so he figured things needed to change, Gave monkeys voices, and placed us bottom of the food chain. . ^ It was me up till that point. Thanks for all the feedback guys, its appreciated! |
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