Heres my second rap. LEts see if i do better

Yo this story is about a kid named chad/
when he was small he looked up to his dad/
he wanted to be a farmer and live off the land/
until one day his father wooped him with his hand/
this confused the child and he could not understand/
what drove his dad crazy and to go mad and he promised himself he would not be like his dad/
now at age 17 hes filled with anger and rage/
hoping to put his feelings down on the page/
but with his rage he tends to not use his brain and it tends to bring him pain/
tends to drive him insain/
where he things his only family lies in his gang/
till one day he beats a kid with a chain/
and the though of jail brings back his pain/
his parents are mad that their boy is bad/
and the boy relizes he turned out like his dad/

hit me up and tell me what you think. i hope im getting better.