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Old 06-05-03, 04:06 AM   #1
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Blue Skies


Looking into the blue filled skies
I see a sea of clouds and reminisce
Wishing everyday could be this different
The beauty of the sky reminds me of a beauty beyond mines

The wind blows with a smooth caressing touch across my face
The feel of such a thing caused past thoughts to arise
My eyes connect with the mystic amazement of the sky
I think of a beauty I know as the white clouds pass by

The light that's held within this cool sky seems so divine
A plane passes by and I wish to my love I could fly
Lookin' into the sky I thank god for sending this angel of mine
My heart fills with a mysterious feeling looking into this blue sky

As I look into the sky a love song begins to play
The words and the feel fills me with a unique aura
The creation of words in my mind wishes to stay
The beauty of a blue sky will always shape my poetic wayz

At a glance most would see but neva fully understand
A blue skys' beauty can never be touched by hand
My heart opens widely as the clouds are passing
The true beauty of this sky will forever be everlasting

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Old 06-05-03, 07:38 AM   #2
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Nice use of words, very discriptive and creative. =)
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Old 06-05-03, 08:06 PM   #3
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Thankz 4 da reply


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Old 06-06-03, 05:19 PM   #4
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Lookin' for more replies.........


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Old 06-06-03, 08:20 PM   #5
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Good creativity and some nice imagery
Like this piece alot

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Old 06-07-03, 06:22 PM   #6
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Thankz 4 da input..........


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Old 06-09-03, 03:21 AM   #7
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uppin'
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Old 06-09-03, 03:38 AM   #8
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hey i was really into this poem here...i mean cuz people sometimes dont appreciate tha beauty this world gives us nah mean...i remember when i was lil i would always stare at tha sky for hours..i didnt know why i did i just did but now i know why..lol..tha sky is a beautiful sight...well anyways nuff bout that..cool poem..pz
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Old 06-09-03, 03:53 AM   #9
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Thank you so much for enjoying my poem.......I'm glad to see people enjoying my vision through poetry.........


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Old 06-10-03, 02:49 PM   #10
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