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Blue Skies
Looking into the blue filled skies I see a sea of clouds and reminisce Wishing everyday could be this different The beauty of the sky reminds me of a beauty beyond mines The wind blows with a smooth caressing touch across my face The feel of such a thing caused past thoughts to arise My eyes connect with the mystic amazement of the sky I think of a beauty I know as the white clouds pass by The light that's held within this cool sky seems so divine A plane passes by and I wish to my love I could fly Lookin' into the sky I thank god for sending this angel of mine My heart fills with a mysterious feeling looking into this blue sky As I look into the sky a love song begins to play The words and the feel fills me with a unique aura The creation of words in my mind wishes to stay The beauty of a blue sky will always shape my poetic wayz At a glance most would see but neva fully understand A blue skys' beauty can never be touched by hand My heart opens widely as the clouds are passing The true beauty of this sky will forever be everlasting Last edited by Demon : 06-05-03 at 08:11 PM. |
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Nice use of words, very discriptive and creative. =)
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Thankz 4 da reply
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Good creativity and some nice imagery
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Thankz 4 da input..........
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uppin'
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hey i was really into this poem here...i mean cuz people sometimes dont appreciate tha beauty this world gives us nah mean...i remember when i was lil i would always stare at tha sky for hours..i didnt know why i did i just did but now i know why..lol..tha sky is a beautiful sight...well anyways nuff bout that..cool poem..pz
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Thank you so much for enjoying my poem.......I'm glad to see people enjoying my vision through poetry.........
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