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Old 06-05-03, 04:04 AM   #1
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My flows iz lethal my rhymes'll eat u//
This iz the prequel amd you'll have no sequel//
I'll treat u like a bicth and instigate on yo shit//
I'll sick blood and cryp until yo whole body splits//
U keep on talkin shit and see if I don't catch u//
I'm Def by mouf fuck wit me and i'll wet u.
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Old 06-05-03, 12:17 PM   #2
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ok if that was in a battle you woulda been lackin punches word play and multis
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Old 06-05-03, 03:02 PM   #3
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Up dat vocab at the end cuz it got a lil weak
and try to use (-) so i have a betta understandin on how u sayin it
You lackin punches juss dont say u gonna do sumin tell dem how w/ creativity

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Old 06-05-03, 03:03 PM   #4
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too short hear to offer any real advice
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