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06-13-03, 05:42 PM | #1 | |||||||
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help plz
IP: CB4A 9405
when i try and rhyme i just fuck my words up and everythin goes 2 bollocks and everythin just soundz wack any1 got any pointers.
if ya want an example look 4 my battle against solar elipse whuch never had a result cos i didnt really produce a verse. |
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06-13-03, 06:07 PM | #2 | |||||||
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try to put ur words in structure....
instead of... jhugfjhgjhwgjfgwjjrefhwgwlfjgwjgfjwjefshgfgsdjfgjs gfjgfjgfjgfgjegfergjferjgrjfegrfygjjfgjsgfjgfruewg fjegfiuyuygfriuryurfuyfguyfgtuktrudhtfrdutrugreufe tuyyydsydygdyguudehsetfrtsfgteewtwefetyfftdtyeehgg dghsdfhgfdfgshgfwfhfqdwffuck ur moms in the buttt blah try like dis..... blah blah blah blah cat// blah blah blah blah blah mat// blah blah blah blah blah blah blah rat// blah blah blah blah bat// blah blah blah blah blah sat// its easier to read and you'll see improvement in rhyme scheme. |
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06-13-03, 06:26 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Ok captain points-out-the-obvious *cough* I mean Born2flow.
Could I suggest a rhyming dictionary to u Ak. The best advice I have for u is to *Increase your vocab *Read some raps on the FL or EFL *Put some time into thinking what makes an effective punch *Be creative. A good idea is to think of something embarrassing that happens to a lot of people, blow it way out of proportion, and just start makin stuff up. A good example would be A father talking to his son about something embarrassing... shit like that. *Learn the lingo. *Start out battlin' newbies, till u get more experience and voting ability. *Read and follow the rules EXACTLY. *Spit second (put that in ur bitch slapped thread) That's about it. Good luck! |
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06-13-03, 06:53 PM | #4 | |||||||
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*PUT SOME JOKES INTO IT TO MAKE IT ENJOYABLE TO READ!!!!
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06-13-03, 07:06 PM | #5 | |||||||
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Stress your brain hard as u can, and the jokes will come. Think of an old joke or saying and make it a put down. i.e., I tryed to read ya mind, but the page was blank. Thats one i used.
Another good one Ive heard was "when ya tried to speak ya mind, it left u speechless" |
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06-13-03, 11:46 PM | #6 | ||||||
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lol that was funny the tryed to speak ur mind shit
laughed me for a couple of seconds |
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