Here are the ones you vote for. Remember, the stanza chosen will start of this poetic cypher. That will end up into piece. Give a constructive reason to why you chose the one you chose.


A
The bronze skin becomes pale in darkness
Ears become soft from never wanting to hark this
A warning to the soul to escape from exclusion
And to be like them, but it's an illusion


B
images of grandeur cloud my focus,
swamin like locus, to devour my goals/
as if my eyes cried my blood on tha page
exhailin my life thru tha pen, inhailin tha day...


C
Injecting time into veins of justice
Beauty leaks tears at model's/criterion's mercy
As pulses race from raging vultures
So sink souls of waining/growing masses


Vote! And remember to give a constructive reason to why you chose the one you chose.

Okay, i'll get the ball rolling.

I vote for this one.

A
The bronze skin becomes pale in darkness
Ears become soft from never wanting to hark this
A warning to the soul to escape from exclusion
And to be like them, but it's an illusion


Come on people, VOTE!!

no ones replied so ima reply... i think B, coz it will reach us in as we all write.
peace~roX~

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im capable of anything my amagination can give me wings, like doves flyin over streets watching many things//Nas

^^Hey, is that a pity vote?! Cos if it is *shakes fists at roxy.*...oh, no, i aint a woman beater or anything...but then again, that could be seen as sexist, right?...

Anyway, though it's going slow. I think it'll slowly pick up.

Thanks for voting roxy.

I'ma vote A, could spawn sum creative stuff off that start

A
The bronze skin becomes pale in darkness
Ears become soft from never wanting to hark this
A warning to the soul to escape from exclusion
And to be like them, but it's an illusion

My vote goes for A. Sounds like a good start for something and I'm interested in seeing where it goes from there.

Yo I got something already so this is to carry on from A

A
The bronze skin becomes pale in darkness
Ears become soft from never wanting to hark this
A warning to the soul to escape from exclusion
And to be like them, but it's an illusion
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Their Misuse will cause their own conclusion
Their combined Fusion is a complexity,
not at heart with dillusion.
And to spite them is a sacraliege,
Their roots delve 20,000 leagues.