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Old 06-15-03, 02:19 AM   #1
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Mission logistics escaped their cerebrum prison, civilian killing program’s military forbade
I lived long enough to execute survivalist tactics, abandonment issues with the basics
Irony details the plastic handle, five-limb weapon extension, and reinforced Juxtaposition blade
Two-face, a portrait Charlie has already painted, a clean slate needs my blood to stain it
I keep the sun under my helmet and the moon on a belt clip, and Love’s picture in a distant promise
SafeReturns forgot Hope. Stealth fighting ComeBacks won’t even blip a symbol detect
Death Guerrilla hand-gripped dagger, Fear grips blood-thirsty projectiles, sweet Kamikaze conscience
My pistol breathes Death. I throw stones and drop bombs just to compare ripple effects
A sleeping cadaver in a bag, military unit mass grave slumbers found underground pincushions
Remove some and lose one, let’s use God’s life-taking techniques with an upward thrust
Fear equilibrium nights, dagger-owner’s throat betrayal slice; Dream mud puddle deaths that Sin stood in
NeverLeave friends, and NeverEnd loves; nothing to lose Poker: no hand and a poor bluff
Tree canopy jungle entrapment, Satan’s ritualistic patrons surrounding, unseen shadows play tricks
Irony villager innocence statement, last resort action: unsheathe fear, let my wrist feel the blade’s kiss
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Old 06-15-03, 02:46 AM   #2
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^^OooOoOOoooOoOOOoOh.....


^^ ....very nice muh,very nice indeed,i keep the sun under my helmet,moon on a belt clip,,,ohhh....nice little spit...multi filled...liked five limb weapon extension,that was cool....sones and bombs to compare ripple effects,ahhaha excellent line,very nice eh....liked it,alot.good vocab and rhyme scheme was everywhere,but i liked it alot anyway,very nice...


lol liked the audios too. :P... ya i found them doing just random page searches lol,go soundclick...

^^^goood drop man,good to see someone that takrs decent care with the shit...and not just rushed peices everyday type thing,good job
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Old 06-15-03, 04:38 AM   #3
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Jesus.....I hate those audios........
I'm taking them off as soon as I have something to replace them with.......

but thanks for the response......
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Old 06-15-03, 06:22 AM   #4
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lmao...un unnn unnnknownnn unknow sensation...haha shits ill man....when y ou gettin new one??
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Old 06-15-03, 08:29 AM   #5
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i liked this a lot, u know your one of the best textcees here so im not gonna give u all that shit but i have 1 critiscm, sumtimes it read 2 much like a poem, for example u meant 2 rhymes such as promise and conciouse which wouldnt really work and would look out of place if u ever did this audioly but its till dope 2 fuck. also u are the first 2 be rated under the new Eborted RAting System!

Eborteds Verdict- A-
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Old 06-15-03, 02:23 PM   #6
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^^Well, actually, it is a poem....... a Shakespearean Sonnet to be exact.......

I just decided to put it under here because I'm actually trying to get someone to make a beat for it and I'll see how I can spit to it
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Old 06-15-03, 02:28 PM   #7
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This was dope
i liked this alot
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Old 06-15-03, 07:43 PM   #8
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Thanks.......

and Atetrack, that chorus was experimental.....testing my limits

And I found they didn't expand to that area
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Old 06-16-03, 07:32 PM   #9
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Upping......
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Old 06-16-03, 09:37 PM   #10
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nice drop keep dat shit up dawg
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Old 06-16-03, 09:37 PM   #11
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nice wordplay, vocab da whole 100 yards
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Old 06-16-03, 10:53 PM   #12
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wow you could actually rap when your not talking shit about 50 cent......

i wont bother with tips cause you goy your own style and it actually nice

can i get a big G G G G G-unit
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Old 06-17-03, 12:18 AM   #13
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Fo Sho man, .......That shit was raw!
keep doin your thing!
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