Chorus:Mobb Deep
Hell On earth who's next and gonna be first?
The Projects is frontlines
and the enemy is one-time

Verse 1:
Im tryin to get a-hold of myself, because the selfishness prevents me from finding my wealth/
The Apocalypse is now and you gotta get ready for it, by the time you realize you had a life full of sins/
Shit taken out, the devil's lasso is tightenin up on me, and i can't think staright, due to metaphorical shit, my minds gone crazy/
So tell me whos next and whos gonna be first, cuz im ready to take all out, to relieve this curse/
Seeming that iv'e gone whild, and no long a golden child, took out to black crimes portrayed in A Green Mile/
And all up in the ghetto, been living here for a while, even in a McDonalds you don't seem to catch a smile/

Chorus:Mobb Deep
Hell On earth who's next and gonna be first?
The Projects is frontlines
and the enemy is one-time

Verse 2:
if the projects is frontline, then the war has already begun, because violence places its aura, darkening all the fun/
And it seems that to dissect the whole blue-print, you'll see all so well, you designed a blueprint, designed to bring hell/
Section 8 motherfuckers livin out of the projects, seemin the same as frightnening, as jail niggas comin out the closet/
The projects portrays the physical presence of the battlefield, and show the life sentence that we all were forced to wield/

Chorus:Mobb Deep
Hell On earth who's next and gonna be first?
The Projects is frontlines
and the enemy is one-time

The enemy has already stuck us with poor housing, people talk on the streets, healths arousing/
If ya talk so negative about it, why don't you help the out?, because all the bullshit seems to portray itself once you open ya mouth/
The battlefield cannot be helped in any other cause, because outside the country we are great, but if you live here,you'll see our flaws/
We are United yet we had the great Coast-Coast war, we know that we lost two soldiers, so if we fight how can we bless they souls/
We are United yet we had the great Coast-Coast war, Biggie and Pac died, and who knows there mightv'e been more/

Chorus:Mobb Deep
Hell On earth who's next and gonna be first?
The Projects is frontlines
and the enemy is one-time

__________________
Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

are the verses not a bit too SHORT?, no..

regardless this is a tight piece, the flow was blazin all the way through, the wordplay and vocab were there as well...

overall:8.5/10

yea i liked dat drop

keep dat shit up dawg

~1~

^^WTF^^

he wants some consrtuctive critisim that'll help him, everytime you reply to a piece you always say - "thats tight, keep it up!"

dats tight

nice vocab

nice format tooo

keep dat shit up

uppin this shit...

__________________
Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!