I'll rip your organs out to prove u aint got a heart to believe in yaself/
break ya legs, strangle you to ya death/
watch you pass out as i take away ya last breath/
see your face turnin blue and purple cause you out of air/
see the doctor proclaimin your damages can not be repaired/
and if i had a peny for every body i mangled, i'd be a millionare/
watchin you paraidin' around like you's got a record deal and a snare/
fight you off with my fists and leave you dead with a stare

This was good
I was digging this peice right chea

ain't much, tell me what u think

how can i could improve?

This Was Iight...Not Much Complexity But Still It Was Alright...I'd Give This A 6/10

Check Out My Drop.. What's The Difference ?

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This is a dope sig.

1. make shit longer, this is short even for a freestyle...
2. use multis, they spice up the flow
3. Your vocab is pretty good, use it more

keep elevatin dawg..