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06-20-03, 01:36 PM
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Sharp Perfection.
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visulise
IP: 4577 CD9A
these colors i see externals of my head
slaughtering my eyes cant blink ....................DEAD everything is hushed i cant even think the colors keep lingering where to be found trying to converse something to me ....................no sound where to suppress for they cant see im bewildered theres no way around losing balance feet wont settle ..............smack... ground noises coming back acute as a kettle the colors diminish not like before their not just outside but in my head ...............door now i can visulise............ upp this shit something i did quick in english
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~ keep singing in heaven |
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06-20-03, 07:08 PM
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Sharp Perfection.
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IP: 4577 CD9A
man start uppin this shiz
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~ keep singing in heaven |
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06-20-03, 07:20 PM
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IP: C1F1 0C20
I don't know much about poetry but I liked the way you made that flow nice poem, Keep it up
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06-20-03, 07:25 PM
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Sharp Perfection.
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IP: 4577 CD9A
thx babe keep uppin
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~ keep singing in heaven |
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06-20-03, 11:54 PM
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Sharp Perfection.
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IP: 4577 CD9A
wtf ppl wake up youve got some uppin to do ive done my fair share so upp this
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~ keep singing in heaven |
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06-21-03, 01:41 AM
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IP: CEF5 716F
WAKE UP LAZY MOFO'S...haha...umm - once again ya shyt was dope - eh short and sweet...ya got ya point across...
not one of ya best but i still felt you holla |
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06-23-03, 11:18 PM
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BANNED For Spam
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IP: 8A8C 512E
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06-23-03, 11:19 PM
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BANNED For Spam
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IP: 8A8C 512E
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06-27-03, 08:52 AM
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Sharp Perfection.
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IP: 399E F0FD
good god man what are you doing? keep uppin ppl thx all
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~ keep singing in heaven |
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06-27-03, 04:54 PM
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Tampons are expensive
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IP: EF0A E7B2
the only thing that about this is the simplistic content that was improved by the the flow and structure of it...
the whole concept of it is definitely unique.... the breakdown of this wouldnt really help a lot so i figured i aint gonna do it ..... but keep dropping some ish...ill keep an eye on u!
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<br><br><center>- Shiznit - - Tampons are still expensive - - That's a Fact - </center> |
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