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07-31-03, 09:53 AM
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An Eye On The Page(The Other on the Clock)
IP: C1DA C961
Animated in Imagination,Fascinated wit the Ordinary
Rich in Heart & Mind,Still my Pockets are Poor as Pennies For More,The Merry,The Score,Too Heavy To Settle Alone So Along With Companions,I Pack up & Set To get on the Road From Head to Toes,Neck and Nose,Equipped To Set My Mark in Wild Terrains,Jungles,Suburbia,all the Way from Central Park Escapin Every Day Cycles,Exploring The New and UnDiscovered Tho The Deadliest of Secrets Stay a Hidden Cloth Under Covers Devious Lies From Previous Nights,as Sin Camoflauges Itself A Man With Too much Pride Succombs & Dodges his Wealth Opposites Dealt,a Similiar Card,A Journey Through the Vinegar Yards & Keepin My Head up High Is What Keeps My Enemies Charged Entities Large,A Prophecy ForSaken,Replaced With Dire Rage A Faded Book,Writing Original Phrases on an Expired Page A Firy Day,Rain From Above,Yet Clouds Are Non Existent,Still Lost All Control,im Motionless,Forced to Watch My Instincts Kill an Instant Thrill,Bystanders Watch as Time Runs off the Clock Portraying Christ,i Tread The Seas,One Foot Comes off The Rocks the Point to this Story...It Has None,So Try To Find It & u'll Wind Up Counting down ur Minutes...Much Like My Life Is So What If my Wife was Isis and Items Really Were Priceless what if,I Could See The Future Of Mankind Through My Eyelids Whats the Use of Asking What If,Cause You Can Ask But It's Pretty Useless,Cause What If's are Questions After the Suffix So fuck Questions...Im on a Quest,I Never Will Honor Death Gone With The Wind and All its Dirt & whats a Goner's Respect? I Father The Best,Guide Those Willing To Be Taught Dont Think Ur Soul Holds No Price,Believe,U Can Be Bought 1st to Speak,Second Fiddle,Never,My Hands...Holding Time As My Name...Brands The Minds,More Than Clothing Lines Keep Intact,With My Backround,Ancestors,Im Aware I'll Give You A Dollar for my Thoughts,With a Dime to Spare Crime is There,Wherever u Lay Ur Eyes,I Find It Ugly With All The Sites i Bare Witness To,I Say the Blind are Lucky Why Would You Love Me,Im Evil By My Own Consent Thankin Me at the same time,My Welcome at home is Spent My Dome is Bent,Scars and all Remind me of Battles Lost A Gentleman or Warrior?,Do i Hold My Hat or Sword? I Scatter Off,Into Space,Thoughts off the Wall,Never Mind em Carded for Execution... I Let My Words Run Wild,Because In Minutes...My Life's Done |
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07-31-03, 09:54 AM
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BANNED: Cheater
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
hot shit dawg
liked the flow alot can u return the favour and peep this please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69865 honest vote man |
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07-31-03, 11:12 AM
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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IP: 0FFC 6812
Shit...This Was Fucken Nice Blood....Fuck Jeah...Feelin It For Sure..You Write Well...These Were Dope!...
Entities Large,A Prophecy ForSaken,Replaced With Dire Rage A Faded Book,Writing Original Phrases on an Expired Page & So What If my Wife was Isis and Items Really Were Priceless what if,I Could See The Future Of Mankind Through My Eyelids Whats the Use of Asking What If,Cause You Can Ask But It's Pretty Useless,Cause What If's are Questions After the Suffix So fuck Questions...Im on a Quest,I Never Will Honor Death This Was Fucking Dope...Kept Me Reading For Sure...Legends???... |
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07-31-03, 11:38 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
uppin...people be sleepin on my shit on this site
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08-03-03, 09:49 AM
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IP: 399E F0FD
^^^^^^^^
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08-04-03, 05:02 AM
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IP: C3EE DC4F
nice wordplay and interesting plot... you got a strong solid flow too... overall good shit...
keep writing and exciting... peace... |
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