Your Too Abstract....Not Appealing
Wheres Your Battle Record
Whys It 0-0...I Dont Get You Man
Its Not What Im Feeling

Im A Poet Asshole!

Who The Fuck Are You To Get To Judgeing?
I Look To The Sky And Hear Nothin But
Bird Chirps As I Conduct My Daily
Word Search Displaying The Gift
To Work Nerves Cause
Your Getting On Mine.....
Im Like Thirty Percent Game Lyrics Reflection
Ten Over Your Head The Only Exception
Mollesting The Alphabet Catching Cases
Like A Center Fielder Recognize Me Playa
Like I Look Familiar On Point Blazin In Your
Secret Cypher As A Sacred Street Writer With
Mad Lines Amongst This Concrete Jungle
Illness Makes Me Up Like Foundation To
Leave You Nothing To Fall Back On
Lifting The Concrete From You
~Content~
The Hollow Man With A Sixth Sense
Steppin Through Crews Like A Hollogram
Helpin A Beat Out Like A Sick Friend
You Need One Like Child Abuse Victims
Forreal Trill I Could Put An Acapella Cd Out
And Still Be The Real Deal You Continue
Trying To Magic Touch What You Cant Feel
If Your Mother Would Have Had An Abortion
I Would Travel Back In Time To Be
Extremely Supportive Your Hearts Porcelin
With A Spout And Fruit Punch............

Open Mic Members Dont Reply
Like Poetic Scriptures With A
Return Reply To Others Threads
So If You Post Something And
Reply To Nobody Dont Expect
To Get Replies......

Reply To Those Who Gave
Lengthly Comments On Your
Shit If Your Egos Bruised By
One Person Your A
Bitch Its Merely A Touch
Of Constrctive
Criticism

Maybe It Was Your Structure.. But I Didn't See Any Apparent Flow After Reading It 2 Times... Maybe It Was Intended...

Wasnt Feeling It.. Either You're Too Deep.. Or I'm Waay To Lazy To Look Hard Into It...

I'm Guessing You Firing Back At The People That Call You Too Abstract And Wack Because You Have A 0-0 Record?

Parts Of This Had Alright Execution...
Like I Look Familiar On Point Blazin In Your
Secret Cypher As A Sacred Street Writer
^Liked That For Some Reason...

Thats It!

Too Lazy..Honestly..Wish I Could Hook Up Audio

All You Have To Do Is Read
If You Cant Depict The Second Part
Your Really Just Lazy....

Peace

^I Am Lazy... Download Acid Pro 4 Or Cool Edit... Grab A Mic From Wal-Mart Or Some Shit... Make This Audio.. And Make Me Feel Stupid

LOL @ inspire sorry son i had the same problem he did. needs work and mics are like 5 bucks and i know you got a set of headphones laying around the house get ghetto hunny

No You Need To Learn To Follow A Verse

Sixth Sense..Sick Friend
Hollow man..Hallogram

Abortion...Supportive..Porcelin

Center Fielder...Familiar
Reflection....Exception

Look For Those Words..It s Not Hard If You
Can Fuckin Read For Two Minutes....you Must
Have ADD And Read Then Go....Hmmm...Fishing
Lets Go Fishing...This Isnt Rocket Science....
Nor Abstract For Dummies....

Concrete Jungle..Concrete From You