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09-22-03, 08:56 AM
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Rainforest (Short Notebook Piece)
IP: FF40 570D
.:Rainforest:.
Resamblin life, Beautiful but still treaturous./ Silent and save, But olso filled with danger./ Quiet, peacefull, but al by al its still restless./ Dirty and ugly, Filled up with controversial hate./ But still pure, By its inner beauty./ Its a few lines, kinda.. Poetry, no hardcore hiphop 
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09-22-03, 08:58 AM
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ayo i think this belongs in the poetry forum holmes
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09-22-03, 08:59 AM
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Lol i forgot we got that here
My bad^^ Somone move this
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09-22-03, 05:02 PM
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true, shit does belong up there.... lol...
by the way, I liked the little concept here, this metaphor thing witheh forest... sounds aight... Make it a bit longer, and this could be a nice drop for the poetry section... peace |
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09-24-03, 10:51 AM
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Blah!
Wrong place uppin/move this someone
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09-30-03, 06:06 AM
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Move this to poetry Somone
Up^^
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09-30-03, 06:49 AM
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IP: FF40 570D
Pff
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10-01-03, 11:49 AM
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This was pretty good...
Kinda sonnetish/haikuish... But very smooth. Definately poetry. Makes it sound as if you've been.
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10-01-03, 11:53 AM
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IP: FF40 570D
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10-01-03, 11:53 AM
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thnx btk^^preciated
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10-01-03, 12:04 PM
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[ Moved to Poetry ]
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