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10-29-03, 03:51 PM | #1 | |||||||
Sharp Perfection.
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friends again reply
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I heard some deep words I never thought i'd hear
At least not spoken from a past lovers mouth Simple they were and held little meaning to others But to me they were a soft spoken welcome back in I've read over these words countless times in my head Poundering whether or not for me they were stated And along that time of thinking I realize the same as you That without question I too long to be friends again Perhaps these quiet words were not sent out for me But I admit now they've lit a small spark within me Its shown me my feelings that ive hid from myself So I guess this is my short reply from me back to you ............miss you too............ just something i typed up quick was meant more for a message then a masterpiece ~Tera~ DONT HATE
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~ Nyla ~ keep singing in heaven Last edited by Content : 10-30-03 at 02:23 PM. |
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10-29-03, 05:22 PM | #2 | |||||||
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wow it filled me wit happiness i liked this peice it kinda like cheered up the forum. good written perspective and heart spoken thoughts. keep it up
peace~roX~
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10-29-03, 06:00 PM | #3 | |||||||
Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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i liked this piece it strings the reader along perfectly and leads to the climax well, i enjoyed it ma, 1luv.
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10-30-03, 01:59 AM | #4 | |||||||
Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
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I think I understood what this ment. And don't worry about it, we are still friends. Of course.
Um... for reals though. This peice I skimmed over it before reading. When I did read it I had to read it slow and methodical. I had to take in every word and let it sink in. Personally, I got the feeling out of this of being lost and confused. I mean, you hear words from someone that they want to be friends again with you, but you're not even sure if those words were ment for you. Correct? I hope so. And I hope they are ment for you. ~Shalom~ |
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10-30-03, 06:48 AM | #5 | |||||||
Sharp Perfection.
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IP: 4427 B15C
lol good to hear we are still friends Necromancer!!!!
yes you caught my emotions, and confussion about the whole deal, but it wasnt really meant to be a hidden message. thanks for all the replies!!!! ~Tera~ DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
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10-30-03, 02:15 PM | #6 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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yes they were meant for you.....
just wanna go back to the way things were back in day anywho, talk to you later maybe, if i get the guts to talk to you |
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10-30-03, 02:19 PM | #7 | |||||||
Special Ghost To Blow
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Filed..cutie...
youve did this pretty well..if it was a reply to krem maybe you should eb friends..or solemates...and prove its not just a myth...this was simple but as usual a good read.. theres not much to critique..nor would I want to... these are your words...simply well written girl...peace |
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10-31-03, 09:23 AM | #8 | |||||||
Sharp Perfection.
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IP: 4427 B15C
content yeah it was a reply to Krem's
thanks for the feedback and yeah i guess i wasnt really looking for feed back or critique, just wanted to figure this all out thanks for all the replies ~Tera~ DONT HATE ps. talk to you later Krem
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R.I.P to my lost girl
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11-02-03, 01:07 AM | #9 | ||||||
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Good piece filed. I can relate to it. Just wantin to talk to that one person again, then when you finally do, its like somethin comes back. Structure was good, and message was clear to me. Overall, I liked it. Keep droppin. Most respect.
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