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Old 10-29-03, 03:51 PM   #1
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I heard some deep words I never thought i'd hear
At least not spoken from a past lovers mouth
Simple they were and held little meaning to others
But to me they were a soft spoken welcome back in

I've read over these words countless times in my head
Poundering whether or not for me they were stated
And along that time of thinking I realize the same as you
That without question I too long to be friends again

Perhaps these quiet words were not sent out for me
But I admit now they've lit a small spark within me
Its shown me my feelings that ive hid from myself
So I guess this is my short reply from me back to you


............miss you too............

just something i typed up quick
was meant more for a message then a masterpiece


~Tera~
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Old 10-29-03, 05:22 PM   #2
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wow it filled me wit happiness i liked this peice it kinda like cheered up the forum. good written perspective and heart spoken thoughts. keep it up
peace~roX~
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Old 10-29-03, 06:00 PM   #3
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i liked this piece it strings the reader along perfectly and leads to the climax well, i enjoyed it ma, 1luv.
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Old 10-30-03, 01:59 AM   #4
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I think I understood what this ment. And don't worry about it, we are still friends. Of course.

Um... for reals though. This peice I skimmed over it before reading. When I did read it I had to read it slow and methodical. I had to take in every word and let it sink in. Personally, I got the feeling out of this of being lost and confused. I mean, you hear words from someone that they want to be friends again with you, but you're not even sure if those words were ment for you. Correct?

I hope so. And I hope they are ment for you.

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Old 10-30-03, 06:48 AM   #5
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lol good to hear we are still friends Necromancer!!!!

yes you caught my emotions, and confussion about the whole deal, but it wasnt really meant to be a hidden message.

thanks for all the replies!!!!

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Old 10-30-03, 02:15 PM   #6
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yes they were meant for you.....
just wanna go back to the way things were back in day
anywho, talk to you later maybe, if i get the guts to talk to you
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Old 10-30-03, 02:19 PM   #7
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Filed..cutie...

youve did this pretty well..if it was a reply to krem maybe
you should eb friends..or solemates...and prove its not
just a myth...this was simple but as usual a good read..
theres not much to critique..nor would I want to...
these are your words...simply well written girl...peace
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Old 10-31-03, 09:23 AM   #8
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content yeah it was a reply to Krem's
thanks for the feedback
and yeah i guess i wasnt really looking for feed back
or critique, just wanted to figure this all out

thanks for all the replies

~Tera~
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ps. talk to you later Krem
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Old 11-02-03, 01:07 AM   #9
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Good piece filed. I can relate to it. Just wantin to talk to that one person again, then when you finally do, its like somethin comes back. Structure was good, and message was clear to me. Overall, I liked it. Keep droppin. Most respect.
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