What If I Was Black(Unfinished) - Goin Audio Very Soon After It's Complete,Heres A Taste.

Hook -

what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i be able to drop tha N bomb and not get slapped/
what if i ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i make millions jus because i was a blackman and i rapped/
what if ma skin was black,what if i owned a mack,would ma ryhmes be considered dope and not considered wack/
what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,or would it make it harder jus because i am black/

What if i was as black as charcoal,would ma heat burn fans up or would i burn maself out and left unconsoleable/
would i be able to rap bout chrome rims and bust-a-rhyme anyplace at anytime,fire it up and not have someone else steal ma shine/
let's play a game,would i be able to waltze through tha hood and not be looked at,would i be able to square dance round wannabe emcee's and not be beat with a bat/
would i be able to show someone ma material and not have them sayin "dark shit but your white",i know that and yo 3 shades lighter and i'd be colourless like sprite/
but unlike all tha soft drink emcee's,i'm a rappin messiah and ma shit is hard aswell as fizzy,not flat and see through,so bow down and worship me on both knees/
if i was black i'd have instant ceridibilty round where i stay,but i'm a white guy so i best play tha background not spit ma rhymes and get outta tha blackmans way/
shit if i was black,like eminem i could wear baggy pants and a tanktop and not be called a wigger,right now i'm jus bein tha way i am hip hop is multicultural but i'm still catchin sniggers/

Hook -

what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i be able to drop tha N bomb and not get slapped/
what if i ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i make millions jus because i was a blackman and i rapped/
what if ma skin was black,what if i owned a mack,would ma ryhmes be considered dope and not considered wack/
what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,or would it make it harder jus because i am black/

If i awoke as a blackman but still felt tha same,i would now have tha typical image aswell as tha brain and tha name/
or would i be called canibus coz theres a similarity to me and him,both smart emcee's usin terms like liberal arts for description,but now we'd have tha same colour of skin/
would tha years of oppression black people have suffered now make more sense,would tha term black power now have me on tha offence,and would i still not want war on iraqi innocents to commence/
if i was black and from cali would i be a blood or a crip,would i be tha definition of hop and hip or would i roll with ma homies smokin in ma whip/
would i be rockin ma bling chains like fifty or singin it's murda on songs like Ja,as a white guy i look as bad wearin bling as a guy thats needs to wear a bra/
like ja me steppin into a hip hop club got peoples thinkin i'm fake,it's as if they think me listenin to hip hop for tha last ten years was mistake/
if i was black would i have tha natural rappin voice,would i still have unpaid bills and an invoice,or would i have already made it and have fans that love me and rejoice/

What if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black/

would bein a baller make me a legitmate hip hop fan,although i throw bricks if i was black ma love of everythin urban wouldn't get me labelled as another eminem fan named stan/
if i was black ma love to stay on tha grime would have people thinkin i've done time,if i was black i could win a grammy like milly vanilly and i would jus have to mime/
if i was black then i'd probly know or havta figure out what actually are grits ,shit if i was black i could probly be able to step into a cypher and not have to cook up a storm to have people think i wasn't pre rehearsin ma spits/
if i was a blackman i would be first served at tha bar and drink henny with no chase,if i was a blackman i would already have a head start in this rap and hip hop contract race/
yo if i was black i would probly have millions of fans and a porche tha colour of cramberry sauce,but if i was black i would probly have a skinny white guy name slim as a boss/

Hook -

what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i be able to drop tha N bomb and not get slapped/
what if i ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i make millions jus because i was a blackman and i rapped/
what if ma skin was black,what if i owned a mack,would ma ryhmes be considered dope and not considered wack/
what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,or would it make it harder jus because i am black/


Yo no beef here at all so save tha comments peeps,i aint a racist or shit i'm jus askin afew questions.It's unfinished as i'm hittin some writers block,but feedback would still be welcomed.

this was a very nice thought povoking open mic piece. It was very good. the flow was confusing but it was a good drop overall. I have no other problems with it. Good shit.

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NOT AS GOOD AS STICKY'S VERSION BUT NONE THE LESS SOME GOOD QUESTIONS POSED.
WHAT IF I WAS A SPIC OH SHIT I AM DAMNIT NOW ALL THE QUESTIONS IS THROWN OUT THE WINDOW.....LOL

or would i be called canibus coz theres a similarity to me and him,both smart emcee's usin terms like liberal arts for description,but now we'd have tha same colour of skin/

I LIKED THIS GREAT MIND AND THOUGHT IN THAT

Thanx dawg.

This was OK
had its ups and downs

But like word said
the original is much better

How about sombody does sumthing like this in a form of the opposite sex

That would be interesting to read

I DID IT PAR AND WE CAN COLLAB ON IT TONIGHT IF YOU WANT....I WANT TO MAKE SURE I DONT FREE POST SO I HAVE TO ADD SOMETHING I DIDNT MENTIO EARLIER...
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YOU TACKLED A HUMOROUS TOPIC WITH SERIOUS PHILOSOPHICS THE WHOLE PURPOSE THOUGH IS TO GET THE POINT ACROSS MAKE IT INTERESTING I WANNA SEE YOU DO THIS FROM SUCH AN ANGLE IT WOULD BE SO MUCH SUPERIOR. A PERSON WITH YOUR TALENT COULD PULL THAT OFF AND GET BETTER RECONGNITION FOR WHAT YOU WERE ATTEMPTING TO DO

yea i'm hittin a patch of writers block dawg,my open mic's are usually much longer,i will go back to this and do it justice.

peace

nice drop...i couldnt find the flow..sorry man...uumm i never read the old version but this was off the hook the word play was good an i liked the meaning good topic man peace

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

not ma best but uppin for a lil more feedback.

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i liked it thun i ain't even gonna lie while reading it had me thinking what if i was white maybe i need to write about that nice work thun check out some of my battles aight ~1~

thanx for tha feedback anymore ?

Peace

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man this is the worst,
damn son you got no flow no rythem... kick it playa