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08-27-03, 01:43 PM | #1 | |||||||
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I was bored when i wrote this
IP: ABE5 5A5C
::music intro::
Its J...Day.... Hahaha.... Aiyyo fuck y'all hatin ass motherfuckers... Look... ::flow:: I'll come through wit 9 pointed at ur dome So u start cryin like a bitch and beg to go home I'll use a shotty or an AK47 Like Im holdin up A Russian 7-11 DOA Nigga bustin out da pen And I got tha pen guards cluckin like a hen If u want a true spitta then get at me dawg Instead sittin around starin atcha dawg This is art Up in my cart.... If u lookin for flows Den go to tha Rappin Mart Spittin mean shit that'll offend ya moms But I dont give a fuck Cause Im droppin bombs Stay in ur place if u know whats good for ya But if u wanna test me, then thats tha hood for ya I show u hatin ass niggaz what Im really about U flowin betta than me? I highly doubt U lil whack cats need to fuckin stop droppin Cause u only got hobo's and bums coppin Wit tha shit u spit U neva bed hoppin U dont get girls so how da fuck u cherry poppin? How is that, nigga?.... Punk ass bitches.... Holla at me... 4-1-2... Its ya nigga... ::music fades:: Leave ya feedback. Any type. Dont matter. Nothin aint gettin me down on my bday. Lataz. Last edited by DeadlySpitta : 08-27-03 at 01:45 PM. |
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08-27-03, 01:45 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 5013 C96D
i can tell u had punches but they weren't organized correctly so they were hard to follow as was tha flow as a whole just organize it and it will get betta
oh and by tha way happy b-day and shit dawg, u go get laid or sumtin |
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08-27-03, 01:46 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: CEF5 716F
lol thanx man
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08-27-03, 03:15 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
i agree.......................structure ya shit betta and u'll b on ur way............
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08-27-03, 03:32 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: CC07 EC19
whack, sorry to say but i thought dat was whack in my opionion. you may have shot a gun, but have you shot someone? no?, i dont mind people talk about guns unless there creative and use it as a metaphorical term. gangster music has fucked up da kids minds dese dayZ lol
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08-28-03, 01:58 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: CEF5 716F
Actually i have uk kid. and if its so whack, lemme see sum of ur shit lol.
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08-28-03, 01:59 AM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: CEF5 716F
and i dont even say nothin bout shootin sum1 lol. maybe ur thinkin has got fucked up uk kid.
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