First came-game-
Then a name-to this dame-
The conversation where you feel you no each other-
The seduction to turn a friend to a lover-
Love made cause sex would require a rubber-
Then find out this martyr,
couldn’t be a father,
when he found you would become a mother-
then comes guilt-the distruction of what was built-
now come the tears- from a woman only 16 yrs-
in her life-
aboute to intice a child with paradice
but she liven in stryfe-
instilled to her mind is she need cash –
an since she got ass-
sell herself as a hoe-
it goes against her convictiond though-
but the child needs doe-
by first trimester-
she had paid for her 2nd semester-
thoughts began to fester-
to do better plus the baby kicks left her pestered-
scared of what to do for funds-
she knew nothing of the life she was raised as a nun-
but what was done is done-
she found out she was aboute to have a son-
wild cravings-an only bills in her savings-
she sold her soul 9 to 5 then from 5 to 9 she at her J~O slaving-
one day while shaving-
felt the razor edge and thought a list-
of excuses to slit her wrist-
end this-but hse cant dismiss-
her shot and miss for love to be seduced in a kiss-
where was god in this?
At the same time who outside-
but dad getting out his ride-
butterflies in his stomach wanting to ask her to be his bride-
despite the lies-and that brighter days have lighter skies-
but shiny moons-
bring night over her heart and for her to make her womb-
the babies tomb-
as he came inside-to tears that she had cried-
over the love denied-
he found her live in death sadly to a suicide.
a legacy-
end before it beguine i as you can you live in extcay-
when hennesey- cant chase the memory-
and everytime you look at weed-all you see is your seed

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nice drop, had a lot meaning, i no a few people who cud relate tragic mistake but a real topic liked it good flow 1

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nice piece had a deep meainingful topic

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nice drop man....feeling it....i know some people that could relate to this also....keep droppin...P C Z

Word~Perfect,you are one of the most illest open mic emcees ever. This was magnificint...Keep dropping man...but work on some of your spelling....

my spelling blows yo i type fast never look at the screen i dont want to loose the idea peep my pyramid of war and my battlen myself peace gaurentee satisfaction

Fuck spelling kid.... grammar check isn't needed fa real... do what you do..
I was feeling this... I see you're still on that audio type drop, this was be nice as fuck in audio... you should think about that

nice drop im feel this kid you got real deep on a realistic sense with ya word choice good drop