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IP: E6E3 0046
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im sure ur not worried about ur personality just ur painted image that u wear distastivly imediatly greeted by why ur breaten out heavy last breaths and u say grace because ur face is bout to embrace death beaten out of all odds because u were said not to be "cool" dressin like all the preps, sayin fuck baby steps movin up ur a fool sit and drule in class over a girl, u cant have, so u try to change become deranged from hate because she still outa ur range become insane with vengence and ur not yourself anymore tryed to become "in" but some dont respect a whore (beat picks up) tired of false acusatations and discrimination placed on my plate played the cards i was dealt, cant say that my life is that great but u know what lets turn this shit around tired of bein sad lets get our feet off the ground we got so much to live for, why are we killin ourselves? jus cuz u got skeletons in ur closets? Well i got some on my shelves slit our wrists, hangin, shootin, when we got nuttin to die for peopele hate u? people call u fat, ugly? what they gota lie for divorce, many go through it, and im a victem but its better then the fighten and the sickness reality is sickness, lifes got so many routes u can either throw a perfect game or get a blow out so hang with u hang with chill with ur friends dont follow the in crowd dont follow the trends (slow beat) im sure ur not worried about ur personality just ur painted image that u wear distastivly imediatly greeted by why ur breaten out heavy last breaths and u say grace because ur face is bout to embrace death beaten out of all odds because u were said not to be "cool" dressin like all the preps, sayin fuck baby steps movin up ur a fool sit and drule in class over a girl, u cant have, so u try to change become deranged from hate because she still outa ur range become insane with vengence and ur not yourself anymore tryed to become "in" but some dont respect a whore (slow beat) dont sin, u throw back god like he posed to be on ur side for the ride, get drunk and high all night, u cant decide go to college or drop outa highschool tellin ur great memorys sittin on a bar stool make somethen of your self, u make u personality makes u, life will take u or break u, make mistakes and it will degrate u mind sits and ur brain starts to migrate soul chafes, cought up in the game lost for life and ur the only one to blame tryed to be someone else, and now ur not the same change and now ur lost without the game |
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IP: C199 63A3
uppin for feedback.......................................... ......
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IP: C1DA C961
damm, no one replied on this yet? shit... yeah the topic I thought was pretty deep, not too original, but not overdone... i'm feeling the concept... flow was aight, vocab was decent... yeah, I liked this...
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IP: E6E3 0046
thanx for replyin, still uppin
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IP: 06AE 0DEE
uppin for replys. im slept on again
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