let me explain pain and the way a heart gets sprained
how deep i let you wander into the depths of my brain
i beg for change screaming with raw energy and rage
played once as a king now nothing more than a spade
think back to the fitful nights of sleepless dreams
i suppose love has a price to or so it seems
i'm addicted to your touch like a crack fiend
acting badly my souls wound needs bactine

i knew this lady she was as fine as can be
so i asked this lady could she ever love a man like me
and when she spoke her words struck my soul
turned to fire what once was cold

how can i speak to it no way can i tell a lie
for you i'm willing to sacrifice all right down to my life
strife trouble and anticipatied tribulations
stay close to you though out my constant litigations
barely known reaped and sown shown loves loopholes
despite the fights and names called you are there to hold
brave and bold fiery cold like ice drops melted on top of my soul
your treasure chest of harried bliss love blooms and unfolds

i knew this lady she was as fine as can be
so i asked this lady could she ever love a man like me
and when she spoke her words struck my soul
turned to fire what once was cold

but believe it or not this evening i plot
to take back every single thing that you've got
love is pain and pain is death the rest i lay to rest
to relieve this stress pressed on my chest
your body once to me was a sacred temple
now i weep as i place a farewell kiss on the edge of your nipple
tragedy struck lost lust leads to temptation
indignation at my discontented determination
led to this current mishandling of the situation
where we BOTH lose me and you BURN in fiery damnation
so come on sweetheart satan fuckin waiting
no time for tears we got a hot spot placed on reservation

i knew this lady she was as fine as can be
so i asked this lady could she ever love a man like me
and when she spoke her words struck my soul
turned to fire what once was cold

the hook wasn't too bad and the verses worked they all could of been done with better volcab but i could see this getting spit it's pretty good

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

nice piece, I liked it a lot. Can't understand why peeps are sleeping on this.
Nice use of vocab and nice wordplay. Luved how you put this edgy thing to it.
Keep dropping, can't wait to read more

1 luv

tight piece,a lil more vocab would do well other than that,its tight.~1~

yeh this was good,
would be better with eter vocab
peace

check out my latest drop, it' called "I'll Never Quit"

uppin

brave and bold fiery cold like ice drops melted on top of my soul
your treasure chest of harried bliss love blooms and unfolds

^was aiight coulda been better coulda been worse work on ya vocab homie.............1

uppin