*aight*


iv seen the battles of the future, and here is what it is
genitics taking on the form of quadruple helix//
differant collections of synthetic materials//
skin tissue covering a cybergenitic realm//
cells manipulate across a mechanical voicebox//
amplifier's connected from da solar plexus to the fore-arm//
needless to breathe spitting at lightspeeds//
which might cause supercomputers processors to bleed//
at a thousands reads, microchips producing static electricity//
trying to pick a punchline randomly, taking various experiments//
using scientifical mathmatical methods to pick the perfect weapon//
taking simulations, evaulating its previous rotation//
of thorough training which replicates the state//
of trying to rape satan//
takes phrases from the all time greatest//
trying to work the calculations of what//
made tupac and biggie famous//
standing brainless, going decades without food for ages//
needless to use pages, digi-equiped with wickadary spits//
battleverses as its fists, heavy enough to codemn lisp//
the arena's beginning musical procudure//
have humaniods on the verge of a seizure//
robots and flesh screaming like gladiators with ceasaur// (lol spelling)
machine and man alike getting drunk and high//
wasting on alchohal and diesiel//
gates arise with the screech of weisel//
i.r. baboon moving fuel consuming mechwarriors//
bowing tech honours to the supercomputer battle holders//
and all those who await, in front of the mechoniod games//
will taste the blood - sweat - and pain...............................

if i rated it: 7/10 because some of tha parts did not fit and there was no wordplay, only dictionary play, tha thing is u tried too hard to have advanced words, that took away from tha wordplay, hit ur head on a cloud, naomean?...

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nice flow
pretty good wordplay
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