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View Poll Results: Who's came Tighter??
ThuG WhytE 5 100.00%
Tonya~Montana 0 0%
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Old 09-11-03, 07:05 PM   #1
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iight 5-10 lines....explain votes only....no BS!!/ NO HATE

CHECK IN AND WE BOTH DROP!! HOLLA!!!
 
Old 09-11-03, 07:06 PM   #2
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yo tonya you on the labtop?........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................
 
Old 09-11-03, 07:07 PM   #3
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my sis doing her homework on it!! she trippin sayin her work first before i get on it! ..............................
 
Old 09-11-03, 07:08 PM   #4
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damn! lol.. that shits been up for weeks man............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ........
 
Old 09-11-03, 07:12 PM   #5
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Ight Just Seen This.. Gunn Start Keyin
Now.. Drop Within In 30 - 45 Ma.. - 0 n e
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Old 09-11-03, 07:34 PM   #6
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I'm Gunna Spit Her Style And Be Prepared-To-Wrap Porn..
Ima Tear In Half Four, You Been Here Since 2002 And Still Spit In Paragraph-Form..
Dare-I-Laugh More? You Battled Me Thinkin You'd Start Writin And Became-Tight..
You Barely Alright.. Checkin Ya Merk List.. You Sure You The Same-Site ?..
Try Ta Gain Height.. Like You N' The Kids You Beat.. Ya'll Are A Bunch Of Bitches..
I Listed To Your Shit For 5 Minutes.. Hey Tonya.. Where Are The Punchlines In It?..
Ya Finished.. The Dream Is.. When I Say Your Wack.. Your Quick To Believe It..
Ure Played.. I Seen It..I Mean It, Shit It Took Me 3 Months To Discover U Dont Have A Penis..
Utterly Supreme-Miss.. Re-Think Ya Sex.. Forget The Text.. Just Turn-Out Lez..
No Good In Bed, Let It Be Said.. Both Heaven N' Hell Rejected You, So They Sent The Slut To Earth Instead..
 
Old 09-11-03, 07:36 PM   #7
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that was an ill verse. i'll vote when tonya drops. but hit up my battle against eastside queen plz...its gettin slept on like a motherfucker~
 
Old 09-11-03, 07:50 PM   #8
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Come On Tonya.. Dayum...................
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I'm ALready On My First Upp And You
Haven't SPit Yet.................................
 
Old 09-11-03, 08:14 PM   #9
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iight my bad.....

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I grab tha mic from Thug WhytE now he's
shook-and-FIDGES// Now he gotta Open
his Own CLOTHING LINE cause my PUNCHES
left him with to many STITCHES//

Thug WhytE wanted to battle so I asked him Why
Test// knowin I'll DEVOUR his Lyrics, call me READERS
DIGEST//

Dam when I spit my FLOW is HOT like a
KETTLE Theme// ThuG WhytE wanted to Rep
NewYork so he started REPPIN SCENE's with
Drag QUEENS//<{get it}

yea you ARTIC style cause ya brain Stuck on
Freeze// you hotter than me, yea if you Step it
up a Couple DEGREES//

i spit Pound for pound as if I was tha Lady
Roy Jones// while all your Punches CONNECT bout
as much as kids witha TOY PHONE//


.......Au Revoir
 
Old 09-11-03, 08:21 PM   #10
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Nice Drop Ma.. But That Was A Lil OVer The Time Limit
WOuldn't ya Say?

Oh Well... Lets Get SUm Votes N' Such..........
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Old 09-11-03, 08:31 PM   #11
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iight heres the layout...both did well...

punches-thug
flo-thug
structure-thug
wordplay-thug
style-thug
overall-thug

i thought thug took this.....

vote-thug
 
Old 09-11-03, 08:31 PM   #12
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i was overall feeling thug whytes verse better....

tonya you need to work on ya structure a bit...i wasnt really feelin ya structure..

thug that last line was a bit stretched but good nonethe less

good battle but i think thug whyte got this

Vote - Thug Whyte
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Old 09-11-03, 08:32 PM   #13
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aight Thug brought too many personals and it was all funny at the same time, the paragraph thing i just noticed was all too true and his punches and wp brought the package like they do on the FED-EX commercials just that good


Tonya some of that stuff i wasnt feeling too much, it was nice but it wasnt too original and there were no personals at all and just like every other verse i've seen from you i (personally) have trouble following the flow

whatever thats what i think if i could vote i'd give it to thug

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Old 09-11-03, 08:34 PM   #14
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Def. needs ta be broken down ... very nice battle by both... ima read it again real quick .:starts scrolling up to read:.

.:done reading:.
Opener: Whyte
Closer/Finisher: Whyte... VERY NICE
Punches: Whyte
Flow: Whyte
Werdplay: Tie
Meta'z: Tonya
Multi'z: Tonya
Overall: Thug took it by a little... real nice drop by both... good drop frum a girl especially... just gotta give it ta Thug
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Old 09-11-03, 08:36 PM   #15
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Thug took this with better punches and personals.
Tonya- dont write in that form. Also need to work on wordplay used in punches.

Vote- Thug Whyte
 
 


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