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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Made To Cant Stop Wont Stop Beat
Aiyyo, I cant stop... and I wont stop Fuck dat shit... get dat ex and pop/ Slow down bitch I dont wanna get no aids Thats like losin $200 in a game of spades/ You'll get played... So bad that it hurts U'll see dis nigga in a room with flirts/ Girls wit skirts and they ready to be fucked (Yea) But... before I fuck, my dick gets sucked/ Like... Whoa... I like that there.... Cmon shorty, do it again right there/ (Cmon) I love da way dat a chick shakes her ass (Yea...) Then I take her to a room and I bakes her ass/ (haha) Many men all up in tha roooom and... We banged dis chick dat popped a shroom and.../ Its not our fault that we cant stop dis shit I'll make every fuckin dj drop this shit/ (nigga...) Bump dat shit... loud... Blow ur ears out... Ima nigga dat'll fuckin flow ur ears out.../ (damn...) I like how women go far for a nigga But... hate it when its $400 a nigga/ (Im not payin...) U a cheap dirt girl and I dont wanna fuck u Dats like... askin a girl to come and suck u/ (nasty pussy...) Switchin tha script and flippin tha tip... Girl, Swallow tha cum, stop takin a sip... Girl.../ Its a Pimp's Night Out so stop frontin I can fuck... and leave u wit nothin/ So try stuntin if ya want It work... Stop Complainin Put dat ass t'work/ (Cmon) Its a Pimp's Night Out so lets Party Until last drop of tha Cris And Bacardi/ Yo... dont act like y'dont know what I mean.... Pimp's do dis shit all tha time... Y'know... haha... |
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IP: CEF5 716F
Uppin
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IP: 103B C99E
ok, flow was good, vocab was a lil basic, mutlies wernt bad, structure was good, overall it was a pretty good piece....keep dropping...
also if you ever get a chance check out my latest open mic...could use some feedback... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81640 |
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IP: CEF5 716F
aight. Will do that for ya. Uppin.
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IP: 1859 6918
finally i read a positive piece...everything is all depressing then i read this.....vocab simple...flow was good...i figured this was meant to be a party type shit since u had cant stop wont stop so thats aight...i usually hate that type of shit but i doubt u regularly do this....if u do then good luck with all that.....
feedback on this open mic http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82853 |
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IP: CEF5 716F
I dont regularly do this. I was tryina change my attitude cause i write gangsta type shit too much and i want ppl off my back about that so im tryin new shit now. Uppin. O and I'll check ur open mic out.
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IP: C586 6DB9
Well i i felt da party bump on this flow
and... i bet the pimps do this stuff... do you? anyways... some of da rhymes are simplistic and i little overdone but for the most part it feels like "progression" not "aggression" {Peace}
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IP: CEF5 716F
yea. they do really lol. Thanx for tha feedback. Uppin.
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IP: 3508 B858
Still uppin... quit sleepin
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IP: 2ED0 C40F
Lol club banger type track,simplistic vocab and word choice,but had killa fdlow and i had the instrumental so i know,expressed topic well so descent drop dawg.
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IP: B275 6AB3
thanx for tha feedback. Uppin.
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