My monoxide- mix to remix with a fix- of dithyamide-
Verbaler homicide...... making lyrical murder.
So basically, You want as much beaf as soy burgers.
There’s 2 kinds of led to fear if i blast-cause I draw fast-
weather the mercury Dip hollow tip…. Or on a skillcraft.
Im that real! My flow down pour regardless of weather-regardless what ever-
Im the hardest and clever-and if I aint your equal…. I can only be better.
Ripen every m.c. in ALPHABETICAL ORDER,per ALPHA LETTER-
So if you ever want a sample…...................... F.U.!!!!
you get beat on beat each punchline hits per sample cue-of 2.
So if it’s a 2 beat count you’ll loose twice-
loose 2 life’s.
Yeah you underground crew types, roll deep-but that’s a metaphor bitch they only R.I.P togeather burried 6 feet.
You all some TRANSIES talken you put work.
maybe on the DALANCIE CORNER CROSS DRESSING kid I flip SKIRTS-and BURRY anyone of you fakes who claim you do DIRT.
It’s NON CENTZ the OMEN with a legion-of cockriders’ that pledge allegiance-To my secretions-of flames that can leave you lames with 3rd degree burn lesions.
Im hot and could hearted…so once the lessons started- you’ll learn I equate to everything from the equator to the polar regions-so fear me.
or Be left departed-like the pangian theory.
i crucify those blasphormer’s for not believen.
If you take my name in veign, you will be left bleeden.
Cause I hustle words… with muscle verbs… you couldnt find in track meeting.
Your styles receading-with skills sponsored by rogaine.
You’re an f-18 im an f-14... kid im another PLAIN.
Another level, you cant see from your 180 degree hemisphere-I rule the earth’s 360 sphere by atmosphere.
fuck being transparent my actions make everything clear.
I don’t like ¾’s of all of you.
That means to me 3 out of every four is whore’s.
Who think fucken with me is your only chance to go HARD~KORE(xxx).
So for you cats that don’t think im twisted with the slur-
Im in the mix and once I stir-
id say fuck you.....
fuck your mom......
and the guy that fucked her.
So forget dropping a cd.. you aint got one-and if you did I wouldnt cop it if it came with a refund.


HOOK:
*scratches* the omens,,,,
this is verbal retaliation-murder kill and assasination.
A MILLION WAYS TO DIE YOU DO THE CALCULATIONS-
strangle a choke artist ,cut his blood sirculation-
then kill the dj for given him rotation.x2

___________________beat change_______________________

You nigguz think you sound cute-but got it confused like obtuse infused with angles measured acute.
i spit the facts thats a fact kid its true-
Your skills harder to understand than latins in domestic diputes.
While my talent translates to a win regardless of subtitles-
So rivals- battle the god qouting exorcist passages from bibles.
Who are you to me? Nothing more than an easy victory!
An out dated rapper trying to get hit by a punch(line) to collect dissability.
These kids is jokes-acten thug but carry no slugz and would’nt be STRAPPED FOR CASH unless they were broke
.Oh that’s your illest joint? Watch it get smoked.
As you get yoked-for being whack…..
I’ll kill you in a song and leave you dead in your tracks.
I un balance peoples' heart rate on ballads.
if I was you and not me then I’d be a waiste of talent.
the kid who secreamed godamnit-that CENTZ showed the whole planet you exposed spitten ASS like you tossed salads.
My extrateresstrial intellectual perception-could alienate regardless of M.I.B protection.
The exsemtion of perfection-
the sybolism of true lyricism.
while your video displays girls shaken they assess for fan hypnotism-you claim realism.
Its just embarrassing you all are a mess- killen rap so basically you assisted in PAC’S DEATH.
HEAVEN BLESS those pioneers- who are not here-until im laid to rest-i'll make thes fakes take they last breaths-just out of respect.
If I don’t succeed my last will and testaments-will distill through my fans inheritence-carry me last rights on sabordinents-and drop bombs on each of these m.c.’s coredinents.
It gets twice that intence-in an instance- while im living cause I can fire bulls~eye regardless of distance.
You subject lacks matter…so it doesn’t matter- ill shit on you like a squeezed colon or blatter.
come back and splatter you flat then do it again and beat you flatter.
shatter-your every appendage and scatter them…like they did OSIRUS plus since- your addicted to persistance-I’ll show you the tight shit with a mic shoved in your anal entrance.
take an x~ray and cram it in till it resembles your large intestines.
This aint a battle verse or threat disbursed-this a curse- for those in my path who wish to get murked my sub verse will submerse-and shock you at a thousand megahertz.
Im better than you better then him better then them.im xx surrounded by mating xy meaning One masculine trapped by some feminem-lesbians.


HOOK:
*scratches* the omens,,,,
this is verbal retaliation-murder kill and assasination.
A MILLION WAYS TO DIE YOU DO THE CALCULATIONS-
strangle a choke artist ,cut his blood sirculation-
then kill the dj for given him rotation.x2

WOW that was like a 5 minute read...

1st verse - fire... i love the number use.. espically that bar with 2... multies kinda lacking but wordplay, vocab and flow more than made up for it
Hook - i felt it could have been better i couldnt find the flow or the rhymes
2nd verse - not as good as the 1st to me... once again the multies lacked, and it seemed you were running out of steam cause a few lines seemed forced

You subject lacks matter…so it doesn’t matter- ill shit on you like a squeezed colon or blatter-and splatter you flat then do it again and beat you flatter.

good internal rhymes but it seemed forced to me

over all great drop kid...
p.s. dont i see you on like every open mic i respond on...

If you would be so kind *not a battle*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80529
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134

i will peep it out twin and thanks for honest feed back

yo your attachment threads dont show pop oh and so you know the sencond verse is a beat change where the style flips also i edited the hook to format batter now.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80529
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134

p.s. i liked the old hook more
u got a PM
with the style switch the 2nd comes out better.. but 1st is stil my fav

AIGHT

yo son...this was Fire...keep reppin' them Boricua mutt Brooklynite Omenz (only me and you lol)...

34 TH SARATOAG TWIN BORICUA ANTES EL FIN MY BROTHER I EDITED SOME OF IT IF YOU SEE ANYTHING YOU DODNT LIKE TELL ME

Utica Av. papichulo...right here...I'd maybe add a coupla more multi'z but other than that...it's all good...

YO WHERE IS OUR COLLAB I SEN CLEAR YOUR PM BOX

aiiight...cleared...

YO hot Shit No Doubt

Am feeelin it reppin it to the fullest


Contact me fo Collabo word

and yea i send u PM

no doubt