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09-23-03, 02:04 AM
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Pointless Writing.
IP: FDD6 AE15
Pain Leaves Hearts Chased, Half Paced.
Decisions In Haste, Life's Merely A Waste. Utterly Cold, You Watch The Tears Unfold. Secrets Told, Feelings Bought To Be Sold. Fake Emcees, Start Claiming The Game. Dont Work, Cant Be Proclaiming The Fame. Rb, I'm New To The Site, Cats In Spite. Cuz A Slight Emcee's Jacking The Light. Short Shit.. Last edited by Ray Zor : 09-23-03 at 02:08 AM. |
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09-23-03, 02:07 AM
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP: 6B7C 736E
short, to the point...
good and right on point sorry feedbacks to small but its just that it was overall good... reminds me of someone but whatever if you would be so kind http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183 |
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09-23-03, 02:51 AM
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IP: 19AF 50C1
TO SHORT FOR THE POTENTIAL I SEE IN YOU HIT ME WITH MORE
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09-23-03, 04:19 AM
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Word.
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IP: 76B1 9A60
Decent piece i thought, it was short but it got the point across i think, flow was good, try adding some more multies, but other than that it was good
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