Made sight, Gold and Velvet divided, seperating Day and Night
the chalice Holds my imagination, who am i to Say whats Right?
Painted sight . . pained in sight of a Dawn breaking our Dreams,
A knotted oak. . thus symbolising the Tie's in Our Family Trees.
The manderin glow as the Sunsets. . colliding w/ a Blue blanket,
As the Shadows Silhouette, Overpowers the Light of Madness.
Conjoined at The Soul of this Piece. . an Explosion Of The Two,
the Combination of God and Satan centered by the wise of youth.
Colliding Views of Green Scenery, the scene lighting my Instance,
i see the Face of Mother Natures glaring at me from the Distance
a Malicious smile spreads her face, laughing at the Blaze of blue,
The time when Day becomes light *vice versa as the sun fades from view. .

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Now why does everything you drop just have to be dope... can't you act like you are human once in a while....lol

nah, but that was a really nice piece man... everything was on point... flow, imagery, everything... & the pic fit into the verse perfectly... overall ill...

you suck

tight drop man. ur description of this picture combined with ur rhyming skills made this come to imagination. for a short piece I was feelin it. not much else I can really say cuz everything in my opinion was to perfection. again tight drop so keep em comin.

and if u have time check out mine and masta C's collab "2 of a kind" and our new one I'll be postin shortly today called "nice guys finish last (feat. Masta C)" some feedback would be much appreciated thanks in advance. peace.

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Yeah this peice was a good read, i enjoyed it, your flow was good i thought, and good use of multies also, good vocab and wordplay, it was just a good peice overall i thought. it was a strong peice.

Ehhh, it was keyed up, it wasnt that good.

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