Forbidden warnings, our country fightin with what happens/
It's sad, seems to think our most intellectual are in straight jackets/
We've gone mad, but the problem is what we fear/
We go to war, in every issue that we interfere/
Seems like we have no other place to go, no place to hide/
like our shining teens, who seem to plunge into suicide/
They never return one death is a tragedy/
A million is a statistic, won over by genious strategy/
Seems like we lost, our war before it started/
but our demise is painfully slow, our death has been retarted/
The apocalypse begins, we look deep into our fate/
We draw closer to our downfall, what romans and persians could relate/
The losing side uncovers, the deep of hidden mysteries/
But take a look at our streets, and tell me if you feel our miseries?/
We lost what we had, and we found what isn't ours/
We found what it is like, destroying minor powers/
Our planet is over, our fate has already been written/
Look at our church, each sin a priest is committin/
Sodomizing, in the house of our very own Lord/
Not realizing, their necks are sliced,by the good of Gods Sword/
Our lives our over, due to original sin, our pains not a mistake/
But our final days are written in, a stone plagued by our fate/

Pain is written through, our blood and its veins/
and with poison in our body,how much can it maintain?/

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Uppity Up

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damn why cats be sleeping on you?
this was a tight peace in my opnion and i think it should be more reconized i cant wait to read more

It's sad, seems to think our most intellectual are in straight jackets/


That was so ill... it means alot man...

This drop was dope, you had nice vocab, your flow was a lil kinda off, but you bounced on it, your meta4s n similies could have had work, but your topic / origniality made it all up man... this was a nice drop... people need to be checkin up on this man. good job.

Thanks uppin for more replies.

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Damnit.
Uppity Up!

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Yeah i agree this was a sick drop,

'Seems like we have no other place to go, no place to hide/
like our shining teens, who seem to plunge into suicide/'

'The losing side uncovers, the deep of hidden mysteries/
But take a look at our streets, and tell me if you feel our miseries?/'

^^those bars stuck out for me.

tight drop here man, i was feelin it.

Ill mane keep droppin dat dope shit.holla.


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look that shit was real real real hot especially

The losing side uncovers, the deep of hidden mysteries/
But take a look at our streets, and tell me if you feel our miseries?/

either way im in a hurry, i want to know if you want to collab with me, pm me or something with your answer.

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

U had sum great lines a good flow i give 9\10 on dis one keep on spittin dis shit

nice peace........def right anything they interfere with does end up in disaster..........the piece was aight,,,,,,,,,,,,,,............................... ...............................

UPPITY UP!

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Good Job ...

i did like this peice, some great meanings involved, also i saw some good internals and good usage of words, the flow came out nicely and the topic was cool. find a title for it mayun, cus its something you should really work on, overall decent peice .. Stay up!

Adious!

Thanks.... again for all the feedback, greatly appreciated. Faze² thanks for that comment, thats the type of shit that makes me wanna elevate till I have you all saying Great piece, instead of overall decent.Uppin

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