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Old 10-05-03, 06:53 PM   #1
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Anotha bad dream-holla back yall

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you cant run, you cant hide yo life is an open field/
i gotta gun its gon' fire so nigga you betta chill/
I'm not a preacher, but I'll put somethin in yo heart tho'/
or dat diaphragm nigga that vest don't go down that low/
call me Ironman boy my beam gon split ya particles/
a snitch like you gon end up in obituary articles/
contemplatin consequences of vehicle homicide/
evaulatin my offenses glancin at this 45/
takin ova yo world like a alien invasion/
in a all black suit like a MIB agent/
so you thinkin I'm playin but Im far from a shitter/
this glock gon be hilarious a true side splitter/
but it'll make you bitter, betta pack it up befo' this lead a/
tear yo leg up, heat yo head up like a mothafuckin sweata/
i'll chop you up like shredded cheddar to serve wit vinigretta/
this baretta make you redda cuz you blushin cuz im betta/
I'll sniff up some ketamines and heat yo house hold/
yo gon smell that damn gasoline on my fuckin southpole/
and I cant be convicted this K gon' leave dat ass evicted/
the bullets gon' nik yo neck, image dipicted should be sicknin/
I'll have yo familly traumatized and talkin to reporters/
How they all saw wit they own eyes the fire come from morters/
my violence has no boarders so i say fuck the court orders/
when these bullets flip and twist and turn yo ass like snowboarders/

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Old 10-05-03, 06:56 PM   #2
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I though it was alright, a little too many words on some of tha lines that kinda stopped the flow.


takin ova yo world like a alien invasion/
in a all black suit like a MIB agent/

^^didn't rhyme too well
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Old 10-05-03, 07:01 PM   #3
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This was alright...it flowed ok kinda lost it at some points...your vocab was pretty good though...you had pretty good metas i thought...your internals were pretty good it helped support the flow...overall it was a alright drop..keep dropping.
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Old 10-05-03, 07:04 PM   #4
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Good lookin. I know it seemed like too many words but I can spit em out to make em flow.
Good lookin yall.
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Old 10-05-03, 07:04 PM   #5
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Good lookin. I know it seemed like too many words but I can spit em out to make em flow.
Good lookin yall.............................................. .......................
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Old 10-05-03, 07:05 PM   #6
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Good lookin. I know it seemed like too many words but I can spit em out to make em flow.
Good lookin yall.............................................. .......................
Invasion
agent
It do rhyme if you dont pronouce the T.
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Old 10-05-03, 08:09 PM   #7
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tu regarde la ruliebookology?
(read the rules. no, it didn't make sense)

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