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				jus SHUT UP
			 
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		i aint posted a thread ina while i bin elavating a bit.. tell me wot ya think.. 
		
	
		
		
		
		
			Fucked up knee, mucked up boots and ma hands r shakee Chunking like a druggie whiteys, thinking I bin dinking too much lately/ So maybe I should quit why I can n let lose, fix ma liver from all dis abuse/ I use to not give a fuck n I still don’t, telling ma self ima get rich im still broke/ Forcing ma self to take another sip but I still choke, I aint mad that ima joke/ Yo turn it up a bit till I feel dis shit, we gon get crunk till we construct the limits/ A modern product of sugar mixes dohnut dips and vodka sips/ Jus possibly dis bitch has gone crazy, n you cant take my stupidity from me/ But every argument I have its occurred, I walk wit concealed words only if I could say what I wanna say, and if I stayed instead of walking away/ you wouldn’t look at me tha way you do and see through, u wouldn’t talk about me the way you do : we wouldn’t have these issues/ coz I would of said a few true things that would fo stunned you you don’t really care bout ma view you jus wan me to become you just shut up and let me speak before I fall week and sink into tha thoughts u might think 
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	im capable of anything my amagination can give me wings, like doves flyin over streets watching many things//Nas  | 
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		This was pretty good..Liked the flow and style...keep it up... 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
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		aight cheers fo tha reply  
		
	
		
		
		
		
			peace ~roX~ 
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		Yeah this was a pretty good piece...it made a good read...you had a catchy title lol so i thought i would check it out...it flowed pretty well i thought...the structure was pretty good too..i like the way you opened to it and ended it...overall it was a good piece, keep at it. 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
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