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10-07-03, 05:31 PM
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...:::Th3(+)InTro:::...
IP: 6F83 6EEA
Some quick skatter brained shit.......
i'll be droppin more polished ryhms later... this juss a sample of my words...... Wach me free 'While..Still..Holdin..Flow' with 'Four..Sylabol..Multies'// Identity born from the 'Miles..Spill-en..Chrome' with dome shots on plot to 'Pour..Intestinole..Filleens'// 'Style..Kill-ens..Before' the whole store-y is put 'Forth' with 'Unbareable..Cutteens'// 'Mentality..Rides..Apon..Pholosophies' kurupteed by 'Realities..Truth'// Spew 'Fatalties..Awide..Across..Countries' vacinities influincing the 'Communities..Youth'// To 'Bloom..Into' devilish 'Ways..Instead..Of..Athourities..Praise'// Selling this haze from 'Room..To..Room' druggin lifes muse to 'Play..Ahead..Of..Infinities..Gates'// I'm the 'Equilibrium..To..All..That..Is..Great'. filling young 'Minds..With..All..Of..This..Hate'// I'm the deaths 'Sequal-Living-Again..To..Fall-Ow..The..State' of mind were there isa place of 'Time..To..Shall..Over..Loves..Taste'// |
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10-07-03, 05:42 PM
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IP: 7EB4 F731
yo the flow was there but not really that strong....
i liked it though...keep droppin... ..peace.. |
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10-07-03, 05:53 PM
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Word.
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IP: 9C1E 2B43
Yeah...this was ok...you should try to make your lines the same length though..flow was ok, needs some work...vocab was alright could be up'd..multies were ok...add some internals to make it flow better..but it was a ok drop...keep at it..and keep dropping.
and if you could leave some feedback.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84048 |
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