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10-14-03, 06:43 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Fucc Hip Hop Remix Please Read!!!!!!!
IP: 19AF 50C1
HOOK: (SUNG)
I used to lover her but the music abandoned me. And I still need her but I cant afford the money Now I miss her but everyone is killing she But I’ll always love her you’ll stay in my memories. The art M.C. rest in peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! B-BOYS reat in peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DJs” reast in peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How did Hip-hop and rap go from being engaged- To being enraged? If I listed the rappers that copy rappers on stage- there be more names then there are lame lines on their lyric page. R&b commited adultery with B~BOP- now there’s this bastard thing called (pop.) The father of illigitiment suburben kids who g0t- they chance to roc-The block and not get shot. what's HIP HOPS’ zip code?,,, a state of emergency- The mergency of wack and plat is at urgency. We used to have fans scream “YOU THE MAN” from overseas- Now we got a bunch R.KELLYS’ and NELLY wanna be's. maken currency_ off of YOUNG teens ovaries. That’s why I question every rappers sexuality- perform TRANSEXUAL surgery if they try an battle me. Yall some bitch m.c.’s DOING THIS FOR A SALARY. This was poetry sopposed to be posed and expressed free- but now subjected to commercial SLAVERY. The CHAIN of events is obviece you lack creativity- BOUND to conform to the MAJORITY of the popularity. Some things are exactly what they seam- Like how you live your m.c. fantacies only in dreams. Be careful what you ask for or you might get what seek- You must bust once every 7 days cause you cumen week. Either a fake remake or a just a dumb fuck- Who COPIES KURTIS~BLOW cause you just SUCK! The game went from ADIDAS to MISSDAMEANERS- The struggle became a hustle now the game is aboute cheeba- Hoes getting low and 20’s on BEAMERS? All that MATERIAL don’t POSSESS SUBJECT MATTER? Man you Just sell out to sale out and subtract- phat to make pockets fatter. HOOK: I used to lover her but the music abandoned me. And I still need her but I cant afford the money Now I miss her but everyone is killing she But I’ll always love her you’ll stay in my memories. The art M.C. rest in peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! B-BOYS reat in peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DJs” reast in peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Last edited by WORD~PERFECT : 10-14-03 at 11:22 AM. |
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10-14-03, 06:46 AM | #2 | ||||||
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THE ORIGINAL
hook: After I beat every m.c. who steps to my right- Defeat every rapper till nothings left but a caffeine hype……. If you an m.c……..b-boy………, breaker………, graffer or a dj- they’s love but if you a fake thug then give me a BJ. Damn right my reference is im cocky, son of bitch- You mad cause you try and cock me, but my sex preference wont switch. verse 1 For every thousand m.c.’s that came and put in work..i leave 500 sleign the other 500 murked- For Claimen they hard with bars and got that ass touched like a cavaty search. For every line you made there’s 50 you kill claimen you ill… but foreal played- You couldn’t come off the top if you were getting a fade. I aint in this for the buissness , I flame raps then extinguished rappers finished. Extra crispy…. Blemish your image in a scrimmage .so fuck yall!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You give brains to get A~HEAD and couldn’t even FORWARD a phone call. And I rep VA like Very Arrogant Verbal Assasin. While you rep an area code where they call you an asshole and has been. There’s 2 type of m.c.’s besides me-on the M~.I~.C Those with ovaries- and those that cram N.U.T’s in they ass cavaties. That’s whyThe day I get signed im a spit nine and start billing- My record label for the track and contract killing. Ive been doing this since before the PONY EXPRESS- Give me 20 minutes you’ll be impressed…. on how I address lines and deliver text to the world faster then fed~ex. No Im not arrogant and this aint a complex- But you say you’re the shit and I agree in a different context. You like ALCHALICS ANONOMYOUS….when you drop bars- Your groups congratulates you but nobody knows who you are. I spar- with hooks and punchlines keep my my focus ample- Then let rappers sample if we ever battle- grapple your adams apple- And twist it off like the cap of a Snapple. Fuck hip hop!!!!!! this commercial bling shit got me anoid- I stay fresh dressed rocken sean john but hate reject labels so fuck BAD BOY. Fuck any cat that forgot what this is aboute- So if you soft and say your hard hitten im knocking you the fuck out. 36 times one for each tooth in your mouth- AND GIVE YOU A ROOT CANAL THE SIZE OF 95 NORTH AND SOUTH. hook:After I beat every m.c. who steps to my right- Defeat every rapper till nothings left but a caffeine hype……. If you an m.c……..b-boy………, breaker………, graffer …… dj- they’s love but if you a fake thug then give me a BJ. Damn right my reference is im cocky son of bitch- You mad cause you try and cock me but my sex preference wont switch. __________________ |
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10-14-03, 09:58 AM | #3 | ||||||
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ain't i not seen your spits before....will look at them from now on tho...you defo a vet, cos i seen the rhyme scheme and flow that you seem to hav made yours, its creative and original and works,
if i a being negative, the vocabularly is not too complex or techincal, but to be fair you hit the topic with the vocab and wordplay you choose: Now we got a bunch R.KELLYS’ and NELLYS’… maken currency off of these YOUNG ovaries. That’s why I question every rappers sexuality- perform TRANSEXUAL surgery if they battle me. i can't really say much more negative, or positive, i think i wanna see some more of your spits that you do aight....this was for the first spit..... it was a good solid drop.....just wanna see some more to see what you like in general, not neccesarily on a topic.... peep my drop, it only 14/16 bars |
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10-14-03, 10:01 AM | #4 | ||||||
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thnlks i mix up my posts from advanced complext word usage to basic i try to attract dif crowds some hate the big word fad and some appreciate colerful vocabs. did you read both cause they mix up complex and basic
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10-14-03, 10:04 AM | #5 | ||||||
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aight....i will read the others.....i'm a fan of metaphors/similies, like hidden messages and a mix of complexity and simpliticity, bascially cos "ILLMATIC" my fav albulm....peep mine....i mean its not my best, but i been type stylin for around 9 months now...i'm droppin babies at it hahaha,
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10-14-03, 10:08 AM | #6 | ||||||
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You give brains to get A~HEAD and couldn’t even FORWARD a phone call.
And I rep VA like Very Arrogant Verbal Assasin. While you rep an area code where they call you an asshole and has been. There’s 2 type of m.c.’s besides me-on the M~.I~.C Those with ovaries- and those that cram N.U.T’s in they ass cavaties. That’s whyThe day I get signed im a spit nine and start billing- My record label for the track and contract killing. this was the best part, i really like the worplay and flow most of all in your spits, think it was nt as tight here: Ive been doing this since before the PONY EXPRESS- Give me 20 minutes you’ll be impressed…. on how I address lines and deliver text to the world faster then fed~ex. No Im not arrogant and this aint a complex- But you say you’re the shit and I agree in a different context it had a message....but i just did nt feel it as much as the first quote.... this is also tight.. I spar- with hooks and punchlines keep my my focus ample- Then let rappers sample if we ever battle- grapple your adams apple- And twist it off like the cap of a Snapple. Fuck hip hop!!!!!! this commercial bling shit got me anoid- I stay fresh dressed rocken sean john but hate reject labels so fuck BAD BOY. i think if you drop at a maintained and consistent level throughout one verse....you shit will be a very high and unique standard.... |
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10-14-03, 10:14 AM | #7 | ||||||
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aight....yo word if you got msn....hit me with your hotmail address...i wanna hear how i can elevate in ur eyes....i get told on different boards different things....like its hot or it needs work or its dope etc...
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10-14-03, 10:40 AM | #8 | ||||||
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pop i drop every day on here and i mean every day you can go to almost andy page and see 1 to 3 of mine on...lol i felt it was consistent...relay a message in a smother of punchlines it isnt that easy .
also the second post is the original if you read that you see the punchline version i di a remix to have more meaning to topic read the first reply pop lol i dont have hotmail but hit me on azazeal666@yahoo.com Last edited by WORD~PERFECT : 10-14-03 at 10:45 AM. |
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10-14-03, 11:07 AM | #9 | ||||||
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this was a good drop, good consistent flow and rhymescheme, this the first drop of yours uve seen but ill def be lookin out for more, i think the first one was better but both were tight, good work,
check this out and let me no how i can elivate http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85276 |
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10-14-03, 11:23 AM | #10 | ||||||
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i went for a battle sonf and then tried remix proving that even battle songs have meaning......that was the goal in this.
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10-15-03, 01:04 AM | #11 | ||||||
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UPPIN THIS DAMN
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10-15-03, 01:21 AM | #12 | ||||||
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yeah nice drop dawg.. the flow was tight keep postin i love readin yo shit dawg.. so post more soon and good vocab
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10-15-03, 02:43 AM | #13 | ||||||
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yea deff a nice drop..
ok first lets get to the remix flow was good, vocab was a lil on the silmple side but it worked...content was good....overall a nice drop... This was poetry sopposed to be posed and expressed free- but now subjected to commercial SLAVERY The game went from ADIDAS to MISSDAMEANERS- The struggle became a hustle now the game is aboute cheeba those two stood out to me^ and as for the original, since i slept on it like a pillow, i'll leave some feedback to that too... flow was nice, vocab was nice, deff had a battle feel to it...it sort of reminded me of copywrite...dope drop...was feeling this a lil more than the remix, maybe its cause i like to hear battle type rhymes more but either way both were nice... You like ALCHALICS ANONOMYOUS….when you drop bars- Your groups congratulates you but nobody knows who you are. illness^ keep dropping yo... |
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10-15-03, 03:06 AM | #14 | ||||||
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your shit rocks
nice flows and vocab keep on droppin ill keep on readin <~~~~~~~~~> |
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10-15-03, 04:24 AM | #15 | ||||||
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