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10-12-03, 04:21 PM
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Banned
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just another rap?
IP: EBF7 21D3
my relaxation tonic, is to smoke the chronic
it makes me bionic,as i get fast like sonic i smoke a lot of dojja,just like a soldier but im gettin colder,as im checkin over my shoulder i know my lyrics make u cry when i say em,time to slay em never pay em, at breakfast i eat golden graham ive got a combo, its real long thought about 56 hits right there on your blond ho too easys girl took my cock with satisfaction, as i made her come i saw her knee jurk reaction i see his mom sellin her bottom often i wouldnt pay her cause her ass is rotton |
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10-12-03, 04:27 PM
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BANNED
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IP: BA4D 3D83
okay thats not that good of a rhyme so just take some time to actually think out yo shit dawg theres like no point to this or anything dawg so keep tryin
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10-12-03, 05:00 PM
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Banned for being stupid
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IP: 95C5 EAD6
for a newb that was ok, u need to elevate on ur vocab and wordplay, try and fit in some more multis/metas, ur flow was ok in my opinion, try and even out ur lines even more though, and it will be even tighter, and next time try and pick a topic not so played, u got potential so keep at it.
peace........ |
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