ME and YungSwoop Collab-petty good track...

The Remix to Swoops Orig. version...

Leave Ya Feed Back

Swoop-Verse 1
Swoop-Hook
Rated-R-Verse 2
Swoop-Hook

Smoken My Life Away(Remix)

http://www.soundclick.com/auidorealm

^Check It..I Redid My Verse..So I Put More Emotion Into THis..What Do u All think Now..

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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center>

<center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center>

this song was off the hook...i was lovin the beat...the hook was tight...i kept playin this shit over and over...you were def on sum shit...i'd give this a 8.5/10

the beat was ill as fuck..........nice shit from both of you...this was just all around dope as fuck...good work guys

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<center>a.k.a Enseign</center>

first cat was sick as hell......

i was feelin that hsit..............

second cat needs more emotion....

hook was on point and catchy.......

nice drop........

thanks for all the feedback...yeah Swoops the First Guy and im the Second...but the diffrence is Hes be doing this Longer Than me...Ive Been Doin audio For like 2 and aHalf weeks....so lol..Theres ur Awnser...im Still New...but Yeah Thanks For the Feedback...but keep upin on some Thoughts.....about This Track

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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center>

<center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center>

this joint is pretty tight... I can't front. beat is nice, flows is nice, ya on point. this is a jump off 4real.

Tight piece................

Was feelin both verses

Tight beat

Nice Collab

Nice song...beat was aight, but the lyrics was on-point and the hook was awesome...good message on the song...YungSwoops...straight fire...Rated-R, just gotta work on rapping with emotion...you kinda sound laid back, but tight track...

8/10

likin' the beat, it's kinda the same as "Conditioner"->Wu tang--> like melody wise, had that bounce 2 it... swoop comes with his usual smooth flow an' delivery, rated-r had a smooth flow, but needs more emotion, sounded like he was readin' it... i mean i read mine but after practicin' the flow for a while so emotion comes stronger.. good track tho, i liked the hook it was catchy.. 1

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Work on your mic presence dawg. You need to spit that shit, dont just read it or speak it. Keep doing your thing though.

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Concise Music

Aight thanks For All The Feed Back...ILL make Shure To Put More Effot n Emotion in To The NExt Drop We do....

keep dropin the Feed Back...

ohh yea...and keep ur eye out..cuz later Me n Swoop Gonna Drop Another Track..and Im Bout To Drop One Wid me n Pair a dyce..n Devestation...aight ...keep on tha look out...holla

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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center>

<center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center>

good shit, really enjoyed the piece,in fact still listenin to it now, ILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yung Swoop is ill as fuck, really enjoyed his verse

9/10

ill joint................................

Hity this up

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