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10-16-03, 07:33 PM
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1st Freestyle(peep plz i can only get betta right?)
IP: A3FD F075
haha yall wish...
It Mack-Milli,dont act-silly,yall aint rap-really.. reloaded,ran up "in da club" an smacked-fifty... jabronis gay-an-phony,tryna portray-my-homie.. now they need a "bodyguard" like Dre-an-Obie.. cus when "shit hit the fan",fakers lyrics-blow-away.. when we put shots thru cars,get ya civic-towed-away.. the kid-is-known-ta-play,yall aint vivid-an-ya-showed-it.. got hot shit bout tha streets but aint livin-as-ya-flowed-it.. i e-mail-kids-threats...watch this alpha male-kick-text.. now rapbattles "urine trouble" like ya failed-a-piss-test.. any that say Mack-not-nice,fuck raps-fuck-mics.. we got gatz-got-knifes..to retracts-cops-lives... steel bats-rock-spines,so who you dudes fear-lesser.. tryin on "cement shoes"..youll start ta feel "pier-pressure".. who you hear-fresher?...admit it im bangin-wit-verses.. wanna chill wit tha god?..ill leave ya hangin-in-churches.. quik 16 to introduce...so whats really good? Last edited by Mack_Milli : 10-16-03 at 07:48 PM. |
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10-16-03, 07:42 PM
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IP: 62F3 524C
yo that shit was off the chains...there were so many hot lines i cant even begin...metas were really good...thats some serious shit right there...holla
check mine "MC Rated G" |
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10-16-03, 08:44 PM
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IP: A3FD F075
thanx...ill peep that piece a lil lata...
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10-16-03, 10:02 PM
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IP: 2BB8 6242
yeah dog mack milli thats whats really good, i can't front keep writing that crack dog matter of fact i want to see you battle somebody and crush them you good dog. keep usin the multis keep it up check out some of my battles in front lines Pacaso vs Pce, and Pacaso vs Rob d
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10-17-03, 06:24 AM
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IP: A3FD F075
no doubt...
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10-17-03, 07:55 AM
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IP: E50F 289B
oooooh weeeee! This is the shit I enjoy reading... Fucking Loved your wordplay... lines like these made this really enjoyable...
"now rapbattles "urine trouble" like ya failed-a-piss-test.." Fucking tight wordplay i love on wordplay "any that say Mack-not-nice,fuck raps-fuck-mics.. we got gatz-got-knifes" Blunt an Raw, I Love on Raw point blank shit.... "tryin on "cement shoes"..youll start ta feel "pier-pressure".." Some more Raw shit... Looking forward to reading some more of ya shit... 1 |
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10-17-03, 07:24 PM
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IP: A3FD F075
thanx..i appreciate dat yo...
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10-19-03, 05:10 AM
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IP: A3FD F075
uppin...
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10-19-03, 01:46 PM
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IP: A3FD F075
dont sleep...
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10-19-03, 02:14 PM
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IP: 10ED AF26
Dog I was feelin the wordplay, not to many niggaz get down like that, overall, it was tight...
Holla at ya boy..1 |
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10-19-03, 02:21 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
This was a pretty dope piece.
Work on your vocab,metties,wordplay and structure.Make it longer. Overall:6/10 *return the favor on my piece,goodfight goodnight* |
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10-19-03, 08:22 PM
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IP: 103B C99E
that was a nice drop, flow was good, nice use of multies...vocab not bad....content was good...it was a nice overall drop...keep dropping son...looking foward to reading more of ya shit...
steel bats-rock-spines,so who you dudes fear-lesser.. tryin on "cement shoes"..youll start ta feel "pier-pressure".. that was hot ^ jabronis gay-an-phony,tryna portray-my-homie.. now they need a "bodyguard" like Dre-an-Obie haha i liked that too... if you get a chance check out my latest open mic and hit me up with some feedback... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85644 |
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