lil bit of a key style song, off da top o ma head,

yo this world has tha economy, tha philosophy, but where da peace//
we bust niggaz, and bar em up in a penitentary, dwellin in tha dark lonesome and lots of greef//
people b like its a free world, they actions make my stomach furl// fuck dis, it aint no free world, i get confused, wit all these wanna b'z//
u think u can do wut u want, man this freedom of speech and actions, always gettin miused//
emceez fuck around, and u get abused, dont meen ta intrude, but u need a clue on wut ta do//
niggaz always bustin they fuse, where da peace, i dont care where u located//
keep da peace, get motivated, all these gang thugs, they think they big, they over rated//
they act iz now out dated, rap has been miss played in tha past decade//
all these rappers think they gangsta cuz they on a murder ramoage//
fuck niggaz, cant u c its da rage, frum da past, past down frum there parents//
u can change ur appearance, get up and leave town, but every one knows bout ur disapearance//
u will neva make tha clean clearance ta ur getaway, u live bein in a seceret, but ur still a fake-ta-day//
all i ask is where da peace, cuz dis world b fallin a part piece by peice//
its on our shoulders ta make tha world a better place ta live, in tha present and tha future//
fuck these men when they hearts get colder, we gettin older but wut bout our wisdom//
where our freedom, WHERE DA PEACE.

feedback plz peeps, appreciated if i get props...