Don’t be shy, their aint no maybe be confident around the ladies
They aint gonna bite you, unless your lucky or give you a dose of rabies
just be confident around the ladies……yes be confident around the ladies

Nothing wrong with never being rich and not making a killin
As long as you get plenty of sex i.e. fucking easy weekend women
I don’t like those who fall under the label of unfaithful-promiscuous-livin
Unless of course it’s me who’s doing all the fulfillin-pleasureful-givin
In other words who’s doing the worthy deed of givin all the fillin
Cos I love women, hell I aint kiddin, need them like my balls to keep on thrillin……

just a quick sumthin for all the lady lovers.............lol

wow, its gonna take me all night to read through this feed..
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good piece, made me laugh, bit short tho,

good vocab, rhymescheme, and flow,

next time try and make it a bit longer but overall this was a good drop,

check out my Gladiator piece on the front page

peace

thnx for the feed, it was supposed to be short though, i do plenty of longer ones...it is just meant to be something to lighten the mood........lol.......see ya and thnx again

nice...sexy lol...now go treat yourself to one of my open mics...

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What the fuck is this?

and u say my flow sux...??


lol...

quit free postin in my thread,
if ya aint got nuthin to say, keep out...........
ya noob............
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what ya got to do to get some feed round here.. huh..........lol
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"I don’t like those who fall under the label of unfaithful-promiscuous-livin
Unless of course it’s me who’s doing all the fulfillin-pleasureful-givin"

i enjoyed those lines... i love them easy weekend women

thanx man, i know what you mean!.....lmao
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Yeah it was a lil short&it made me laugh.Your flow was on point stayed on topic,but what you need to work on is multis,metties,vocab&wordplay.
Hope that helps ya
*please reply to my "goodfight goodnight" piece*

yo started off weak, then just got better an better
nice short piece
made me laugh
i'll look out for some of your other shit

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