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lil sentimental
IP: 0612 539A
accompanied minus the girl of my dream//
ment to be alone in this world or so it seems// im above average in some, but below in this mean// my worlds so cold and sareen// lost the best thing boys, she had my heart// don't mistake this piece cuz i still will spark// ive seen the empty plague hit me, as i live in the dark// still i remain worlds apart// disconnected from reality, in in up roar// reminces fly past my like a bird whoe sores// its a lesson son, learn it the hard way first// J said it best, boys we need to put that woman first// i ain't afraid to admit my loss// i guess just gotta keep my head straight on// keep movin on'
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MATCH.........GOT U ![]() Vote @ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=114041 ![]() you new to RB, man bet you get dissed alot// if you was a child molest youd still get dick alot// what is you confused cant member which team you be with// i know you shirts old navy but your mouths on seamen// ![]() |
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IP: 06EF 4E9D
too short to really criticise, but with what you drop
it was an average piece really but kinda felt cuz its on some deep shit 1 |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
not a very lively sublect, but looked like you put thought into it, i thought the flow was ok, but the rhyming scheme was too basic, indroduce more complexity.........peace dawg....
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