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11-05-03, 03:39 PM
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I Am The Light
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[Week4] Ray Zor (0-1) vs Pot1ent (0-1)
IP: CB2E 7CE0
Whoever Loses This Match Is Out Of The league
Topic: a last good-bye due date: saturday judging end's: monday
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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next? sacred scriptures record (5-0) Last edited by deacon : 11-05-03 at 03:46 PM. |
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11-05-03, 03:44 PM
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Jee-You Knit?
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IP: FD30 BFEF
NOt a Casket match, we will not have those.
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Better-  Throw Back .Compton Records. .Vicious Determination. "There are times when silence has the loudest voice" - Mike Bibby The First Ever Middle Weight Champion |
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11-05-03, 03:47 PM
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I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
alright yeah wasn't sure...
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11-06-03, 01:31 PM
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IP: 1494 5729
I'll drop on saturday. .Ma bad for not dropping last time. .
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11-08-03, 09:45 AM
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IP: AF13 4C74
A Last Goodbye
The obscure tears before neared towards joy Now when injured here its deplored to destroy Love was restored by envoys to sew the tears Alone in despair cuz they couldn't hone repairs Both roam on air unprepared for their break up Futures like 'get me outta here' wit no make up Elates shut when they slowly stagger towards.. Hagard rewards & love now daggers & soars Stabbing in the night, Having recite their fright Of the strike on their lifes thats much opposed The gut revoloved then dissolved into a mould & shows their twisted mixed feelings they had They couldn't even show they were feeling sad Emotions cause commotion like the twin towers These two don't cower!! they stand proud & fall Like great magicans they didnt let reality enthral Which was calamity,fueled by loads of crude love They loave to use up, but can't!! Like fossil fuels Do anythin possible to renewal the love mauled Last edited by pot1ent : 11-08-03 at 09:51 AM. |
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11-09-03, 01:00 AM
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I'm an alias...
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IP: A092 9E01
this was pretty good...
rhyme scheme was good... nice emotion... Probably one of the better pieces I've read on here... I'd say... 5.5 out of 10... honestly... good job...
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11-10-03, 01:27 PM
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IP: 7A52 73B1
blah, Ive seen better from you
I wasnt feeling the subject, but you put nice emotion into it but the flow and rhyme scheme was on point props Vote - Pot1ent, lol |
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