|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
11-04-03, 05:08 AM
|
#1
|
|||||
|
Masquarading 4 U
|
How will we grow????
IP: 6F9E F23B
How can we grow in this environment,urban decay, we burn away
Violence is all we see nowadays, is there a way we can play? Without the threat of harm for the youth,it's rough in the endz Nowadays I don't wanna sit on the corner with my friends cos all that develops is trouble, all we learn to do is struggle And when the sky turns the dark of night, no one loves you You realise that life ain't fullfillin, we livin dull and life is grimy Especially in Manc, all we see is grime and gun crime How can this be our future, we in a matrix, got no control Life gets hard, all alone, losin conrol, needin to hold Need to hold on existing friends, slowly bein taken from the endz How can this be justice, HMP (prison) the life thats for my friends -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1st verse and chorus just keyed now, want more holla and I'll continue
__________________
sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one! |
|||||
|
|
11-04-03, 05:32 AM
|
#2
|
|||||
|
Masquarading 4 U
|
IP: 6F9E F23B
com eon, feedbak!!!
__________________
sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one! |
|||||
|
|
|
11-04-03, 10:16 AM
|
#3
|
|||||
|
Masquarading 4 U
|
IP: 6F9E F23B
feedbak
__________________
sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one! |
|||||
|
|
|
11-04-03, 11:09 AM
|
#4
|
||||
|
Banned: Permanent
|
IP: 3A1D AC66
This Wasn't Bad.. Decent Even.
Depth Was On Point And Flow Went Fluently Yet Got Caught In Sum Spots.. Just Try To Work A Little On Getting To The Point And Not Stretching It Out.. Thats All Please Hit Mine Up In Return http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=89500 |
||||
|
|
|
11-04-03, 04:40 PM
|
#5
|
||||||
|
Pleas, Not the teeth...!!
|
IP: 258A 3451
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87346
HOLLA MINE BRO......UK..!! .................................................. .................................................. Well....I begg to differ in allot of ways....But allso agree in many ways.... I read this earlyer in IT at college...and i really thought it was full of talent.... i liked the 1st bar....but what got me is the flow of this line... "Nowadays I don't wanna sit on the corner with my friends" I dno why...but it just strook me.... Overall man, I give it 7.5(8)/10.... |
||||||
|
|
|
11-05-03, 08:22 AM
|
#6
|
|||||
|
Masquarading 4 U
|
IP: 6F9E F23B
uppin for some feedbak
__________________
sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one! |
|||||
|
|
|
11-05-03, 01:27 PM
|
#7
|
||||||
|
Pleas, Not the teeth...!!
|
IP: 3354 DAC6
Yo holla mine man..!!
|
||||||
|
|
|
|
11-09-03, 12:14 AM
|
#8
|
||||||
|
Guest
|
IP: 32D9 0BD3
That was so tight shit..word to that..keep it up
|
||||||
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
