Fucka Open Mic Foum Getting Slept On! Condemn Them All To Hell!


Please Read This.. Not A True Story By Any Means But A Lot Of Emotions Came Out Last Night.. Anybody Good With Open Mics Please Reply With Feed And Pointers.

This Tells A Very Vivid Story.. Pay Attention To Each Line.

Random Thoughts

Same Shit Different Day... I Hope I Can Sustain The Rain
Tempers Flarin... And Bloods Pumpin Through My Veins
Another Comment Made.. More Names Added To My Hit List
Just More Jokes Gettin Me On The Verge Of My Wrists Slit
Thoughts Swirlin In My Mind... Anger Devours My Mind
Write Back Your Death Wish... And Leave It Signed

Yours Truly

But Whats Worse Truly... Is Nobody Understands Us
You Revealed My Secrets... For You I've Lost All Trust
As I Approached The Bus.. I Found Out I Was Left In The Dust
You Betrayed Me.. My Signs Of Life Are Fading
Never Call.. And I'm Drawn To The Conclusion You Hate Me
Always There For You.. Remember The First Time You Got Laid B?
It Was Shady.. Left Me For That Supposed Lucky Lady...
That Hates Me.. And I Bet You Can't Even Remember Her Name
Im Goin Insane, Addin Up the Reasons To Leave You In Pain
Number One... Hell I Can't Even Begin To Explain
Number Two... Your Were The Only Person That Kept Me Sane
And Kept Me Sayin.. Today Is Worth Living
Instead I Got Worse Living..
And You Brought Out The Pain That Lurks In Me
Workin Fifty.. Hours A Week.. Just Goes To Show Ya
My Life Has Peaked.. And It Was Nice To Know Ya
Or Is It? Considering Never Do You Even Visit...
Back In The Days We Was Bros... I Guess You Don't Miss It
I Was On The Edge..
Then You Pushed Me Off And Left Me Emotionally Dead
Wishin Ya Read This..
You Coulda Saved Me Now You Can't Do Shit
I'm Hoping He's Dead.. I Don't Wanna Be The One To Do It

I'm Sorry

Almost Midnight.. I Knew You'd Be Hangin Out With Friends
This Friendships Over... Because Its Too Dirty To Cleanse
Shoulda Been There.. But Tonite's The Night That...

Your Life Ends

Its 1:13.. The Darkness Swallows Me As I Slam The Door
Covered In The Shadows.. Not Knowing Whats In Store
The Moon Watches Me.. With Suspicion Quickly Arising
I Still Can't Find Out Why... I'm The Subject Of Despising
I Felt Eyes Upon Me.. So I Walked Over And Got Low
I Creeped Across The Grass.. And Opened Up My 73' Bronco
I Slowly Began To Drove, Studying My Surrounding; Eyes Peeled
Worryin So Much About Him.. I Lost Focus Behind The Wheel
Then I Began To Swerve Across The Road..
As I Attemped To Tag The Brake With My Heel
Let Out A Faint Squeal, And Flew Through The Windsheild

In Critical Condition

Landed In The Hospital... Too Many Injuries To Count
I May Be Dying.. But Still Nobody Comes Around
Thoughts Are Out Of Wack.. Mind's Too Fucked Up To Repair
As For My Friend.. He Died In The Accident... But Do I Care?

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<center>Deja Vu

..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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Why would you do this?

off topic but still on

im getting lazy with my feedback
now i reply to les but my comments are more in depth
i hate when i respond, drop a link and never hear from the person...

Booo... Go Kill Yourself!

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<center>Deja Vu

..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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I'm not the one that posts Open Mics in R.R.

thats an open mic...oops
it was another long post i didnt want to read so i just did a vague answer

like this

^^ Ha ha thats true

0ooo0000oooooo...nice comeback

FreePost

Come Back...

Dats An Even Better One For You To Use^...

Holla...

Your Welcome...

-Azaz

Bruk... Your Name Is Gay In Itself.. I'm Not Even Sure Why I Am Talkin To You. You Be On My Nuts Like My Fuckin Dickhead. Man Your Almost Worse Than Brixton. Stop Responding Back Here Please.. I Don't Care For Your Posts.

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<center>Deja Vu

..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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LOL GOOD COMEBACK AND IF HE IS SO PHUCKIN WITTY THEN WHY WOULD HE DO THIS LOL

GOOD ONE DICKHEAD^

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<center>Deja Vu

..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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this shit was actually tight...flow was off the hook...I thought you was wack Aisle but I was wrong....

I Was Never Wack.. But Thanx For The Feedback.

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<center>Deja Vu

..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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nice shit man............from the point "your life ends" it was really good....very deep...creative too....nice...

but you should have posted this in emcee iteraction instead of RR maybe