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To Take Life
IP: 7B47 7A87
Just a little something I had off the top, I was wondering if anyone wanted to flip it with the topic, but anways, i guess I'll see what the thoughts are on this....
the tip of the blade to the edge of the knife// consumed with pain, wanting to take life// ![]() to end this never-ending breath, to end the tears// ending all sorrow and taking away all fears// tumbling off a cliff, plumbiting to the ground// taking away all memories, that in life will never be found// no one will understand, while living in misery// uncontrolled earges for death, sight growing weary// ![]() will god accept the soul, when it makes it way to the sky??// and until that day comes, still wondering, wondering why// ![]() |
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
thought this was a pretty basic drop, the flow could have been better, if the structure was more constant, but it was ok, but way too short....oh and a would stop putting the faces at the end of the lines it dont look good dawg...all in all this was a pretty weak drop, but the concept was ok, just wasn't delivered too good....aight....Pc
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