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11-18-03, 07:19 PM | #1 | |||||||
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yo keystyle, feedback please
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keystyles....
yo scratch and sniff the craftless shit of this laughin bitch who rips quick limitless thats me, what significance is worth this all ideas are skeptical, theories pertanent? sickness overpowers sour by the hour the divine fatality of reality lion coward some emcees breath stanzas like cigarettes i inhale them and absorb like fuels in cool jets askin her yet? hesitatin like hamlet i slam it, like seven two to the basket the perils of morals horrible limits infinite criminals done sins by inhalin little hits is this fit? survival of them the fittest judged by God or science, who is the realist critic intoxicated by 8 ounces of poison drink fucked up and a mind alter is one of many human instincts why do we love the glove pulled over our faces just to have fun? thats still escapin to other places i side with it like hypocrite and swim in my own critisizms if the most opposed jokes, still issue individualism? its a sinical ritual of human nature mind vs. body vs. escapin normal nomenclature who can rise above transcend like thoreau did without findin themselves 6 feet deep eroded i rip up whats holy and combine it with what i believe in but its nothin but flame of hypothesis to breathe in looks can be decievin, but so can personalities identity is zero cuz manners submit to formalities and honesty is worthless so much that it hurts him burns like the 3rd burn or what we all are yearnin death is like life, we dont what the fuck it is but whos business is it to know? all we do is exist no direct subject, just spillin my mind i dont know how bout some feedback?? |
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11-18-03, 07:54 PM | #2 | |||||||
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yeah man, i like keystyles any way, thoght this was decent, it flowed pretty good, and you had some nice vocab in there, and it seemed quite well structured.....Pc dawg...
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11-19-03, 11:58 AM | #3 | |||||||
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Post your replies up, thanks bud.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87961 Thats the rules thread if you need more info. |
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11-19-03, 06:11 PM | #4 | |||||||
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92893
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92692 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92825 sorry about that bruklor.... uppin for feedback, thanks.. |
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11-19-03, 08:08 PM | #5 | ||||||
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I like the piece, I keep up on a lot of your drops and your pretty consistent, keep up the hot shit. No disses, just props.
-Aragorn- |
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11-20-03, 11:31 PM | #6 | |||||||
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uppin for some feed back
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