replied to Lm, camarac,and unemceeable.


i see MAN hunt for treasure-
when they dont understand the price of life knows no measure-
and your as rich as you want with mental pleasure.
with no parnetal advisory-
its a wonder everyone hasnt been raised by the streets and t.v..
and i think to myself....
if i can save one then in my way i've won-
but what will one do against a legi~on?
basically i turned that person to a vict~om.
the brain is the strongest weapon but has less apeal-
they like guns cause their a threat so we keep them conceiled.
this the deacde of war and we not even half way through-
and already see 2-it realer then you knew.
the president is a pussy plus lifes a bitch-
so it only makes since that civilation would get fucked by foreign dick.
and it gets more strife-when to provide for a wife-
i journy to the land of the free but am paid to be in slavery.
what you will....will reflects the life you build-
so what is life?
birth to 25 before im statisticly killed.
what did i build ?
a coffin this aint about race-
but about faith-
and turning the land that fucked you to a resting place.
and i've seen both sides from the block-
to a soldiers slot-we americas hitman for minimal wage bought.
we serve and defend-rights that cant bend-
but when it goes against the grain evolutions slain when they ammend.
is the government our friend? when friends help each other-
but we fund our enemies for war against we and steal from our brothers.
KEEP your enemies closer- but that dont mean keep your friend apart-
cause amidst a mist of confusion... the illusion is
your enemies are mistaken-
for friends and see an open heart-
your left forsaken.its the same way when you try to be an everyone pleaser.
you'll never be happy with yourself-
and money has no emotion so how can you be made happy with wealth?
im as poor as they come-i came from the slums-
but my woman makes me the weakthiest without funds-
cause her love comes in abundance delivered in lump sums.
so what do i tell her and my future daughter and sons.
except life is to be protected but we take it with the same guns.
their supposed to be used to defend-
this planet is as fucked as we made it there's no need to protend.
its like cassius and brutus when they overthrew ceaser-

i write every poem i resight at songs length-
cause i dont want the idea to be lost before mans extinct.
i find it amazing is theis th reult of all things-
kids get killed cause we got to eat-
but at 99 for BURGER bread lettuce and meat.....
it takes less then a dollar to eat like a KING.
so a dollar for your life is the sum of all things.

HOOK: WHO AM I WHO ARE YOU WHAT DO I DO?
WHEN IM YOUR LOVER AND THE PERSON WHO WILL YOU.
I PLEDGE ALLEGEANCE TO THE LAND OF THE FREE-
BUT THATS THE ONLY THING WITH NO FEE.
EVERY THINKG ELSE HAS ITS PRICE-
SOMETIMES LIVING IN HELL IS LIFE JOURNEY IN DEATH IS PARADICE.

Seen Better.. But THis Was GOod None The LEss
Good Flow, Depth n' You Brought Good Shit To The
Table With This One.. The Hook Wasn't Bad Either

Hit Any Or All oF These Up In Return
Forever
Dont Call
Before Your Gone

thnks i thnk lol

this was a good drop, you've been dropping some different styles lately its been tight, this i thought had a good hook good wordplay and overall had a great aspect for the farmost...great read man...keep it up man

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Yea this was a pretty good drop homie. Good depth to it, like Ausp. I think you should add a little more excitment to it. But it was a good read, no dought bout that. Good drop hommie. Return the favor and go peep ma shit. " My Thoughts " it will be up in a second, aight...

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