Replies:
LoCo - "Love Me"
Camarac - "Music is Dieing"
Jay-R - "Reverse Psychology" (all worth the read I might add)

This song is dedicated to my ex-girl of 2 years. it was a very abrupt break up, and I wish it never happened, she was th eonly stability in my life...vibe with me.

Verse One-

When it rains it pours; shoulder’s strained from the force-
Of the weight of the world, on the blades of a corps-
I’m just the shell of a man I was, I came and I saw-
But I’ve yet to conquer myself; ashamed of a loss-
Haunted by hatred and all this anger causes stress-
I ran into this shit, and never paused for breath-
Heaven’s stairways guided by the flagrant halls of death-
I’m drowning and Katrina, you’re the anchor on my neck-
I can’t be what I want, but my supremacy reigns-
My train of thought wrecked, and left my memory stained-
Words blend in the page, emotion vented through rage-
I sit and envision times that since have decayed-
My temper enflames my thoughts, picture me caged-
In by a female’s persuasion to get me to stay-
Yea right, it’s no use I’m to into my ways-
This is our final kiss, my life’s symphony plays-

Hook (Not Yet Written)

Verse Two-

Maybe I shouldn’t have took you for granted, face it I died-
When I asked you to forgive me, and you stated “Goodbye”-
This is too much to take I’m aching inside-
I feel like I got stabbed with a stake in my side-
Internally bleeding, I think we both know the cause-
I changed, and you showed no hope when I called-
My rash actions, got me ready to relapse, asking-
God to grant me one more potion: That’s all-
That I really need to make it through this pain I’ve soaked-
Into every pore in my body, till it stained my soul-
Begging Heaven for the utmost strength and hope-
Forget hope, I just want some more strength to cope-
This is beyond cruel and unusual no one’s to blame-
But myself, Thank you for just throwing away-
The only thing you had to live for, throw in the chains-
Is this love, or am I just going slowly insane? –

Hook (Not Yet Written)


I hope everyone can feel my pain, I'm gonan write verse three soon.



-depression is hell-