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11-26-03, 08:21 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Phillie Blunt (0-0) vs. Maven (0-0)
IP: F5C4 5CFC
Topic: One Life to Live
Verses Due: December 1st Voting Ends: December 5th You must vote on 3 battles
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11-27-03, 11:08 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 5F2A E1C0
Im Postin As Calda
G'luck Mav
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11-28-03, 09:31 AM | #3 | |||
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o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0oH
I'm on this like opey on a whopper combo.
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12-01-03, 07:52 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 5F2A E1C0
Writing Now
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<center> .. Topical .. .. Regime .. </center> Last edited by Calda Merda : 12-01-03 at 07:57 PM. |
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12-01-03, 07:54 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 5F2A E1C0
- one life to live -
- one voice to hear - - one like i wish - - one choice is clear - 9:00 am Sid: Calda, if you wanna prove your friendship n' be a real man (hands him a revolver) .. meet me tonight at 10 Calda: (looks at the gun) A real man, hmm.. 9:30 am Becky: Calda, I'm leaving town at 10 'clock tonight, and i want you to come with me (Kisses him n' runs off) Calda: (puts his fingers over his lips) My love, hmm.. LIFE OF A CRIMINAL A hostile child, styled in blue bandanas Walked for the mile, awhile til' he stand up Never wait to intake, n' made the sides-hate Was only a number, next to the crime-rate Never needed credit, stole what he wanted Never left regreted, For those that he taunted Life in a barrel, A trigger never loved Life of a thug, n' wanted none of the above Took Sid's invitation, met him at Ten Killed a few men, but never awoke again LIFE IN LOVE Lifestyle still present, inevitable reprieved Freshness of his breath, profound in his beliefs She respected his gangsta, but never enjoyed it And all the bickering, finally annoyed him So he stopped the crime, man of chivalries Hate n' misery brought righteous deliveries People were envious, but he didn't mind the count A thug lived man.. finally turned inside out Took Becky's invitation, met her at Ten They left the state, n' never seen again ONE LIFE TO LIVE, WHICH ONE WILL YOU LIVE BY? One way to go, but two roads to take Think of this as your life, which life will you make? - one life to live - - one voice to hear - - one like i wish - - one choice isnt so clear -
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12-01-03, 10:00 PM | #6 | |||
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IP: A9A7 727D
oh my fucking God I thought the verses were due on the fifth.
I will write in a moment.
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12-02-03, 10:27 AM | #7 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
hmm? in a moment or a day./..hahaha
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12-02-03, 04:58 PM | #8 | |||
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IP: 6816 6794
Everything that I do for Pat must be refined
it seems unfair I have just one, when my cat has nine laying on the mat was fine, because the tide washed over cleansing me of falcities; leprachuans with squashed clovers seem to rub shoulders with the people of my dreams a seperate universe where the steeple is as it seems unclean, and covered in a film reserved for Disney flicks So I continue to be Pyramus to these Thisby chicks taking his free Vicks to soothe my throats incessant ranting the garden overgrows the yard, I'm a result of poor planting Trying to give a hundred and 10% when all I possess is fifty Forgot to get this place cleaned, but they say the mess is thrifty are you still with me? Because this can really get confusing you're just abusing, the brand of deodorant you're using on our skin, to begin the day in the life we all must live in and performed incorrectly, it will definitely fail to connect me I hope you try to resurrect me before they try to disect me and my essence, this presense represents exactly how you feel yes, it may be only one life, but how much of it all is real? bah, sloppy format. sorry it's late.
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12-02-03, 10:46 PM | #9 | ||||||
wanna play doctor????????
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IP: DFB8 2D7C
i'd hafta say this was deff. a close 1...
really hard to chose...both of the flows were equal i think... both packed some nice imagry into the piece both hit the topic creativly... but i hafta go wit calda... i was just feelin the story more... i liked how you put it...it was good enuf fo the win vote-calda |
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12-02-03, 10:56 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 6588 491C
I'm not saying I know alot about open mics
but Caldas hit me harder. Seemed Maven was a little bit too simple and stretching for comparisons. The cat his nine line was out of nowhere, seemed off topic... and a few other things I was wondering where it came from. Overal a nice piece though. From both. I thought Calda's was dope, real dope innovation with the presentation of his topic. Had he got a little more into detail and made his piece longer it could've been something legendary. Great drop. vote - calda
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12-04-03, 03:00 PM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: A044 7DA1
Both came nice
good imagery and flow from both maven had a lot of good lines that didn't really connect I picked up that he was trying that effect by saying 'how much is real' which was a dope concept that made you look back at the end but it just didnt hit me as hard as calda's did his flow his simple and easy to follow his rhymes were elevated overall, he told a compelling story in the best way possible and really wrapped me up in it by asking what would I do and the setting and times gave it a sense of urgency dope pieces from both, but Vote - Calda |
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12-04-03, 03:47 PM | #12 | ||||||
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I vote calda.. his shit was a lot deeper, on topic, and really more elevated than maven
good battle tho |
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12-04-03, 04:50 PM | #13 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
^^^Mavens elevated mayne...just so you know....i'll post when i can and edit in this..
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12-04-03, 09:50 PM | #14 | |||||
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IP: 6E65 1B29
Vote- Calda
Why? His story was dope, and his verse really caught me, Mavens was nice as well. Bars seemed a little stretched and shit but the flow was there and everything. Calda just came out better and grabbed me.
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12-07-03, 01:33 PM | #15 | |||
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caldizzle my nizzle kicked my ass fo shizzle.
yeah, I'm a gankstuh. great verse dood. [closed]
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