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11-29-03, 08:51 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Tragedy Struck
IP: C1DA C961
Song: Tragedy Struck
INTRO: I walked with you.... CHORUS: Im not afraid to say that Gods got a plan for me [All I know (Ive signed with you)] but its twisted and torn with the pain of tragedy [all ive seen (Ill die with you)] and the loss of close ones makes it hurt much more [all I do (I've tried with you)] Its sad to see you go I dont wanna let go [reflections of you (I've cried with you)] VERSE 1: RehaB The last thing on my mind was death on my way to church but God had his hands at work a plan to help or a plan to hurt I'm not sure but at that moment we were hit by a drunk driver blindsided and realizing at that time I thought my brother was flying when really it was me I was flung from the accidents debree and I watched as the weight of the two cars crushed my family and at fifteen years old I was suddenly catupolted into action grabbin my dads arm and gaspin for breath away from the gases but the seatbelt was fastened so I smashed in the glasses and grabbed it to snap it but I could'nt keep up the traction I slipped and fell saddened I could'nt rescue the passengers and after minutes and drastic work I watched the gasses burn I saw my dad he turned and mouthed the words that forever stayed it was meant to be this way God has a plan for you just pray and when that car came my way you know I prayed that fatal day when my angel saved me from the embrace of heavens gates CHORUS: VERSE 2: Fonetic 10-26-02, thats when my wonderful life came crashing down A smile that was once there switched into a frown Remember that day like it was yesterday Was outside in gym class laughin and began to play Then I heard I was checkin out, thought to myself why now Then silently to myself in my own tears I began to drown Then it struck me like a 1,000lbs were dropped upon my mind I knew my grandfather days of resting had ended this time a man I so looked up and idolized God took him away, but to a better place than this life Suffered from cancer of the esophagus and spine At his viewing I wished I could of just hit rewind the tears swelled up and fell just as I saw the coffin Later that night I got no sleep, stayed up tossin Wishin that God was playing a trick on me and this was a dream But then I saw the light and began to see CHORUS: VERSE 3: THe LAst PRophet OUTRO: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95297 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94245 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=946402 holla |
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11-29-03, 09:08 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
YO WUS^ REHAB, THIS WAS A GOOD PIECE FOR A BEGINER.
VOCAB COULD USE SOME ELEVATING BUT IT WAS OK, FLOW WAS GOOD, MULTIS WERE AIGHT, OVERALL A 6.5/10. AND YA IM FROM PORT SAINT LUCIE, DO YOU LIVE IN OR AROUND THERE. PEACE
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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11-29-03, 09:10 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
OH FORGOT TO SAY THAT I THUOGHT THE CONCEPT WAS REAL DEEP. THE CONCEPT WAS GOOD.
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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11-29-03, 09:15 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: DF7B C8F7
yeah ths concept was tight.......executed ok....but could have been better...quite limited vocab....but overall not bad....keep elevatin.....pZ
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11-29-03, 09:18 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 8E70 C31B
Tite shit for a beginner ....... good concept had multis and can elevate
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11-29-03, 09:48 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
lol im not a beginner but thanx any ways everyone...obviously this was a collab and the first verse was mine the second was not...
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11-29-03, 10:03 PM | #7 | ||||||
This is my first post!
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IP: 73CF 7C4B
pretty good... concept was ight kinda played
Flow was straight multis was tight 7.5/10
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