REPLIED ON THESE FOLLOWIN THREADS. CHECK OUT NOK'D ESPECIALLY. FEELIN THEM ALL.

METHODZ:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3234#post973234

MASTA C:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3236#post973236

NOK’D VIZION:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hlight=GAZANOVA


DAVID vs GOLIATH


VERSE ONE
IVE BEEN BEEFIN ON THE NET RECENTLY BUT THIS RAPS CUMIN FROM THE HEART/
IM GONNA TELL IT HOW LIFE IS ROUND MANCHESTER TO THE END FROM THE START/
IM WRITIN THIS IN COLLEGE WHILE GETTING SCHOLARS AND GETTING PAID/
MEANWHILE ONE OF MY OLD BOYS IS GETTING CONCLUDED WITH A BLADE/
HE GOT STABBED IN THE HEART FOR NOT PAYIN FOR £10 TICK ON SKUNK/
SO THE DEALER DECIDED THAT WAS A GOOD REASON TO KILL – WOT A PUNK/
WE ALL KNEW THE MURDER, HE WAS MY OLD BEST MATE FROM HIGH SKOOL/
I FUCKED HIM OFF A COUPLE OF YEAR AGO, HE STARTED ACTIN THE FOOL/
IF THERE IS ONE, THE FUNNY THING IS THAT IT HAPPENED ON 9/11
I AINT RELIGIOUS BUT GOD I HOPE THAT GUYS IN HEAVEN/
YOU KNOW, WHILE IM SAT HERE IN COLLEGE I COULD ALSO GET KILLED/
COZ THAT’S WHERE HER WAS, LEARNIN TO BECOME A BUILD-/
HER, HIM, ANY OF THESE PRICKS CUD KILL ME IF I SLACK FOR A SECOND/
BUT THEY'D END UP IN THE PEN, WUD THERE MOTIVES BE QUESTIONED?/
WAS IT OVER DRUGS, LAUGHS OR JUST FOR FUCKIN THEIR HOES?/
NO USE ASKIN ANYONE BUT THE FUCKIN KILLER, ONLY HE KNOWS/
I GOT BEEF AGAINST THE WORLD COZ THERES THINGS ‘N’ PEOPLE I’VE LOST/
TO REWIND TIME N DEAL WITH SHIT BETTER – HOW MUCH WUD IT COST?/
I WISH I CUD AV ANOTHER CHANCE OF PLAYIN LIFE DIFFERENTLY/
THE ONLY THING I ACHIEVED IS STAYIN OUT OF THE PENETENTARY/
JUST LIKE PAC I SEE NO CHANGES AND ITS ME AGAINST THE WORLD/
BUT UNLIKE BIGGIE I THINK MORE MONEY MORE PROBLEMS IS OBSERD/


CHORUS

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

VERSE TWO
SO ITS ME AGAINST THE WORLD, DAVID AGAINST GOLIATH/
AND AGAIN THE SMALLER FORCE IS GOIN TO TRIUMPH/
COZ I WONT LET THIS PLACE GET ME DOWN, ILL JUST DRINK HEAVILY/
AT THE END OF THE NITE - FALL INTO MY HOUSE, CAUSE STRESS MY FAMILY/
THAT’S OK THO COZ MY STEP DADDYS ALREADY DUN THAT/
FUCKED OFF LAST CHRISTMAS, LEFT NO MONEY, ACTIN THE TWAT/
AND NOW HE GOT A NEW WOMAN, ANOTHER SLAG TO SHAG IN HIS LIFE/
SO HE CAME ROUND TO TELL MY MOMMA AND CAUSE MORE STRIFE/
SHE'S THE SISTER OF A WOMAN WHO HAD AN AFFAIR WITH MY BIRTH FATHER/
HE DIED WHEN I WAS 1, HEART ATTACK, BUT THERES NO OTHER WAY I’D RATHER/
HAVE MY LIFE COZ I GOT MY MOM, BROTHER N SISTER OUT OF IT/
SOME PEOPLE WANNA DIE BUT COZ OF FAMILY I WANT THE OPPOSITE/
ME AND MY BROTHER ARE TIGHT LIKE STARSKY AND HUTCH/
WE SLING AND PARTY A LOT, NEVER BEEF TOO MUCH/
HE NEARLY DIED FROM CRUPE WHEN I WAS NEARLY THREE/
NOW WHENEVER I’M IN TROUBLE, HE BE THERE FOR ME/
MY MOM WAS BORN WITH 1 KIDNEY AND IT GOT INFECTED/
2 THIRDS HAD TO BE DETATCHED WHEN A SIST WAS DETECTED/
MY SISTER AINT MY FULL, ONLY HALF FROM MY MOMS SIDE/
BUT SHE MIGHT AS WELL BE, THAT’S HOW IT FEEL INSIDE/
SHE AS CUTE AS CAN, WANTS TO BE A DANCING STAR/
AND LIKE THE SUN, I KNOW SHE GONNA BE THE BIGGEST BY FAR/

CHORUS

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

VERSE THREE

FUCK SITTIN BACK ON LIFE,CUM OUT ALL GUNS BLAZIN/
COZ I CAN’T BE TO SYNICAL ABOUT MY RAISIN/
MY MAMMAS BEEN LIKE A PILLAR, THERE AS MY SUPPORT/
WHEN I WAS PLAYIN UP AT SKOOL N GOT PUT ON REPORT/
AND WHEN I GOT SUSPENDED FOR FIGHTIN IN THE HALLWAY/
SHE SHOWN ME THE LIGHT HOPING THAT I WOULDN’T GO ASTRAY/
ITS TOO LATE FOR THAT COZ I ALREADY FUCKED UP IN COLLEGE/
FAILED LAST YEAR, GOTTA STAY ANDEXPAND MY KNOWLEDGE/
IM JUST CHILLIN HERE, WRITIN LYRICS WITH MY HOMMIES AND THE GIRLS/
BUT MY HEAD IS SPININ AND I CANT THINK OF ANY WORDS FOR THIS VERSE/
COZ MY MINDS GOIN CLOUDY AND NOTHINGS REALLY CLEAR/
WHATS GOIN ON IN MY MIND AINT WHAT I SHOW ON THE EXTER-IOR/
COZ I GOTTA KEEP MY HEAD UP N KEEP MY MIND SAIN/
SO MY LIL’ SIS FINKS EVERYFINS OK – SHE DON’T NEED NO PAIN/
NEITHER DO I, INFACT, NON OF Y’ALL MUTHA FUCKERS NEED IT/
SO WHY DON’T WE STOP MERCYLESS KILLINGS – AND JUST FUCKIN LEAVE IT/
AND IM SICK OF SEEIN TEENAGE BEAUTIES GETTING LEFT WITH KIDS/
USE A FUCKIN JOONY, GET AN ABORTION OR JUST FLICK UR OWN CLITS/
JUST DON’T GO HAVIN SEX, HAVIN KIDS AND GIVIN THEM A SHIT TIME/
EVERY NIGHT, TUCK EM IN BED, READ THEM A LIL’ STORY AND SING EM A RHYME/
SO IM GONNA SPIT U 1 LAST LINE TO THINK ABOUT LIFE/
CHILL, RELAX, AV PEACE AND STOP LIVIN BY THE GUN N KNIFE/


CHORUS

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

Liked this piece mate.....kno what ya been goin thru n wots happened so I kno the story behind it etc

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

dayme this was tight, wordplay could do with a lil fixing up, but it was cool. rhymes ok, flow was word, apart from that it was worth reading!

Fuck yeah! Fuck yeah! finally real fuckin mc on dis fuckin site!

^ Moron.

Well ..

.. i seriously don't know where to start on this, i read through
it and my attention was wandering before half way if im honest = /
The flow to me seemed off by a lot, it seemed to drift away off
and on between topics .. a lot of the time the rhyming was basic, the caps lock didnt really help much - just hurt my fucking eyes to read this garbage. Wordplay was like .. non existant? Maybe its just me cause the newbies seemed to get it * shrugs* Overall i didnt like this at all. Sorry.

Elevate.

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W o r d P e r f e c t

YO, UPPIN TO GET A LITTLE MORE FEEDBACK. CHANGED THE FLOE A LITTLE TO PUT IT ONTO MUSIC SO IF U CATS GIVE ME SUM FEEDBACK I'LL RECORD THE AUDIO AND PUT IT ONLINE.

nice.....real nice ...I can feel what you saying homie.....
its seems real deep.....i like that ....stay real

Go on Gaz Lad! Not bad i personally reckon 'My Mothers Wedding' Was better, but you cant compare yourself to me, haha. jus playin.

not bad gaz.....Dappa where in coll are U?

Im at home, i got up late, u foned me didnt'cha?