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01-01-04, 09:37 PM | #1 | ||||
Nigga Ima OG.
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Rap as a Life
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As I sit and demand my pen to write scriptures I look on the other hand, raps are all fixtures Like lookin @ artist pictures - all have different meanings. Religions with different believings, its deceving Rap as a God to some, and Satanic to others Brothers, and whites.. come together for one From a notepad, to a mic, to a net-cee And a Emcee... one family, dissing yet rapping The pen writes, and the mouth moves The voice decives, and the image & meaning leaves Have's the fan thinking & blinking, yet wondering. There ambition, & antuition in each verse keeps ur pondering Intuition from the smartest rapper, to a no vocab thug Writing for the same reason, rap love.. Making demo's and going platinum, sellin bootlegged Taking drugs, and flowing street anthems O.Din and goin to jail, yet never suceeding to fail Fleein yet returing stronger then ever Achy, makin you angry, writers block blatnly. From a 50 cent pen & an old notebook Simply bent off rap wit a bent hopeful dream Infinitly from the same destination' Trying to make it to the same place, the industry Wether you make it or not, if you try - Thats winnin to me..
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01-01-04, 10:16 PM | #2 | ||||
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01-01-04, 10:32 PM | #3 | ||||||
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it was okay. i wasn't really feeling it. i thought the flow was off. 5/10
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01-01-04, 10:39 PM | #4 | ||||
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heh the flow in the shape of multis..
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01-01-04, 10:43 PM | #5 | ||||
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Yeah this was alright i thought...structure in this was alright.....flow was ok, it got off at some points though through out the piece....your vocab in this was good i thought....you had some good multies....but overall this was alright...keep at it.
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01-01-04, 11:36 PM | #6 | ||||||
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"Intuition from the smartest rapper, to a no vocab thug
Writing for the same reason, rap love.. " Wouldn't be too hard to make that into a hook if you messed with it a bit. I like the idea of this freestyle and overall I think it was well done. You could probably expand on the whole idea of comparing different rap style with religion... in fact, I might steal that from you |
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01-02-04, 12:00 AM | #7 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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Good Job, It Had A Good Rhyme Scheme, Nice Metas & Multies. The Imargery Was There. Good Read. Keep It Up.
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01-02-04, 12:07 AM | #8 | ||||||
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Good Job, It Had A Good Rhyme Scheme, Nice Metas & Multies. The Imargery Was There. Good Read. Keep It Up.
^Exactly |
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01-02-04, 02:02 AM | #9 | ||||
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01-02-04, 05:51 PM | #10 | ||||
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