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SiK WiT iT pt 2
IP: 3A79 B1A6
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TheProphet777 SkiddZ Masta C I roll 30 deep to block-buster just to grab a movie slit the clerks throat, dont even take the money just like his jewlry who you tryin to fool-b, my shit aint elementry first grade rappers are better then some main-stream ones dont use my name in vein-like-a-phene does MC's seem futile against me,brutile rhymes i spit off the dome im so iced' my socks be chrome, i switch the subject more then mixer i got rap-terets, just spit wats on the mind, like abrupt does blood all over the ground, 1 sound the car pumpin in the glock bumpin out, cats jumpin out, no doubt we killin sumfin' u be willin to go surgicaly? or do we gotta letherigcally remove u off the street without a beat, i take this kid to his feet, then to his knees pull the heat out, and pull ~ i thought he was trusted but he rushed me... 3 kids 3 knifes, 2 stiches? no crutches, no lunches fed threw straws? u hurt me like new cats who cant use there paws... im being sarcastic faggots rotten bodies in my basement, face-it, you've never even seen blood u fainted when u saw ketchup on ur burger further- more, im kickin in the door, pullin dropin to the floor get a new whore, cuz she's red on the 8th, im spittin clips wit pace without a trace? i rip shit then spit it out in ur face I worship devils' to the fullest, hitler! hitler! fuck that bullshit kid was pussy, lucky i wasnt a jew back then, i'd dare him to try n squish-my-family im on the top of the tree - the key to the lock the G' on the block, load the chamber - expload out wit a glock 2 of together, he goes to jail? judge gets a hit on his name- till hes in the grave, we be riddddddinnnn forever doin 187 on any local 7-11, haha that shit is crazy pass it then blaze it, b im high as a cloud in the sky - no lie, i could die, and still be spittin' gettin ur mother smothered, then covered wit clips, blood drippin and me sippin' on some wet-dead-pussy... no lie white old ladies appeal to me, fuck im hardcore...just to add more- i think the fans should know, how i keep the same flow: I recycle my rhymes, 2 times, to better the enviorment, to get more illness used out of em...
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This was alright here i thought....both of your structures could use a bit of work though, both of you had some stretched out lines, should try to keep them a little shorter than that...and try to add some multies into this to help out the flow...both of your vocabs were pretty decent could be up'd a bit though...but keep at it.
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IP: 3A79 B1A6
ooooooooooooooooooooo yea i had his name there by mistake heh
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IP: 3A79 B1A6
it was just me, that was a diff collabo in my notepad
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This is my first post!
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IP: 3A79 B1A6
if u dont know i got 2 split personalitys in here
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uppin 4 u bitches who got a pillow on ur head
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Banned
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it was good flow was ight wordplay ight vocab good punchlines ok multis ight over all 6.8/10
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Flyweight
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IP: 4577 CD9A
YO WUS UP LoCo.
THIS SHIT WAS TIGHT MY NIGGA, FLOW VOCAB, MULTIS, WERE ALL THERE. OVEALL A 8.9/10. HIT UP THIS LINK AND DROP SOM FEEDBACK THX. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97930
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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R.B's Demigod
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your fuckin wordplay was bangin. the punches hit and the structure was on point keep that shit up dog.
Holla at em
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<marquee>FUCK YOU!!! YEAH YOU BITCH</marquee> <center> ![]() slept on battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105181 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113861 |
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This is my first post!
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thanks for reps
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this was hot twin needs a little work but hey thats why we post to elivate i thought you were mia damn twin yo get with spike i want to see how you both collab togeather i think yall would come ill
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honestly, i stopped reading tha shit on "i roll 30 deep to blockbuster to get movies" line, can't be too dope if you decided to type that shit in.
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ya w-p was nice
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Over Weight
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IP: 4577 CD9A
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Amen, are u sure this isn't SuK WiT iT pt 2???? really, dropp the gangsta image, it dont work on the net, to help u elevate, don't listen to anyother post before this one. Just go back to the drawing board
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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