RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 12-10-03, 09:33 PM   #1
LoCo
This is my first post!
 
LoCo's Avatar
 
Joined: Oct 2003
From: Chi-Town 616 HOLLA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
SiK WiT iT pt 2

IP: 3A79 B1A6

Repped:
TheProphet777
SkiddZ
Masta C



I roll 30 deep to block-buster just to grab a movie
slit the clerks throat, dont even take the money just like his jewlry
who you tryin to fool-b, my shit aint elementry
first grade rappers are better then some main-stream ones
dont use my name in vein-like-a-phene does
MC's seem futile against me,brutile rhymes i spit off the dome
im so iced' my socks be chrome, i switch the subject more then mixer
i got rap-terets, just spit wats on the mind, like abrupt does
blood all over the ground, 1 sound the car pumpin in
the glock bumpin out, cats jumpin out, no doubt we killin sumfin'
u be willin to go surgicaly? or do we gotta letherigcally remove u off the street
without a beat, i take this kid to his feet, then to his knees
pull the heat out, and pull ~ i thought he was trusted
but he rushed me... 3 kids 3 knifes, 2 stiches?
no crutches, no lunches fed threw straws? u hurt me like new cats who cant use there paws...
im being sarcastic
faggots




rotten bodies in my basement, face-it, you've never even seen blood
u fainted when u saw ketchup on ur burger
further- more, im kickin in the door, pullin dropin to the floor
get a new whore, cuz she's red on the 8th, im spittin clips wit pace
without a trace? i rip shit then spit it out in ur face
I worship devils' to the fullest, hitler! hitler! fuck that bullshit
kid was pussy, lucky i wasnt a jew back then, i'd dare him to try n squish-my-family
im on the top of the tree - the key to the lock
the G' on the block, load the chamber - expload out wit a glock
2 of together, he goes to jail? judge gets a hit on his name-
till hes in the grave, we be riddddddinnnn forever
doin 187 on any local 7-11, haha that shit is crazy
pass it then blaze it, b
im high as a cloud in the sky - no lie, i could die, and still be spittin'
gettin ur mother smothered, then covered wit clips, blood drippin
and me sippin' on some wet-dead-pussy...
no lie white old ladies appeal to me,
fuck im hardcore...just to add more- i think the fans should know, how i keep the same flow:
I recycle my rhymes, 2 times, to better the enviorment, to get more illness used out of em...
__________________
Reppin NUCLEAR CONCEPTS


Grimey - Records

Last edited by LoCo : 12-10-03 at 09:40 PM.
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-10-03, 09:36 PM   #2
Menik
Word.
 
Menik's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,017
Joined: Aug 2003
From: Mifflinburg, PA
Status: Offline
IP: 6FDC 23CB

This was alright here i thought....both of your structures could use a bit of work though, both of you had some stretched out lines, should try to keep them a little shorter than that...and try to add some multies into this to help out the flow...both of your vocabs were pretty decent could be up'd a bit though...but keep at it.
Send a message via AIM to Menik Send a message via MSN to Menik   Reply With Quote
Old 12-10-03, 09:37 PM   #3
LoCo
This is my first post!
 
LoCo's Avatar
 
Joined: Oct 2003
From: Chi-Town 616 HOLLA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 3A79 B1A6

ooooooooooooooooooooo yea i had his name there by mistake heh
__________________
Reppin NUCLEAR CONCEPTS


Grimey - Records
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-10-03, 09:38 PM   #4
LoCo
This is my first post!
 
LoCo's Avatar
 
Joined: Oct 2003
From: Chi-Town 616 HOLLA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 3A79 B1A6

it was just me, that was a diff collabo in my notepad
__________________
Reppin NUCLEAR CONCEPTS


Grimey - Records
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-10-03, 09:41 PM   #5
LoCo
This is my first post!
 
LoCo's Avatar
 
Joined: Oct 2003
From: Chi-Town 616 HOLLA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 3A79 B1A6

if u dont know i got 2 split personalitys in here
__________________
Reppin NUCLEAR CONCEPTS


Grimey - Records
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-10-03, 10:50 PM   #6
LoCo
This is my first post!
 
LoCo's Avatar
 
Joined: Oct 2003
From: Chi-Town 616 HOLLA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 3A79 B1A6

uppin 4 u bitches who got a pillow on ur head
__________________
Reppin NUCLEAR CONCEPTS


Grimey - Records
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-10-03, 10:58 PM   #7
SPEC-tacular
Banned
 
SPEC-tacular's Avatar
 
Posts: 126
Joined: Dec 2003
From: NY ,StronG IslanD, B-WOOD
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 409D DA38

it was good flow was ight wordplay ight vocab good punchlines ok multis ight over all 6.8/10
Send a message via AIM to SPEC-tacular   Reply With Quote
Old 12-10-03, 11:39 PM   #8
Spike Sanders
Flyweight
 
Posts: 143
Joined: Oct 2003
From: P.S.L.
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 4577 CD9A

YO WUS UP LoCo.
THIS SHIT WAS TIGHT MY NIGGA, FLOW VOCAB, MULTIS, WERE ALL THERE. OVEALL A 8.9/10.

HIT UP THIS LINK AND DROP SOM FEEDBACK THX.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97930
__________________
NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-10-03, 11:53 PM   #9
Da_Killa_Kid
R.B's Demigod
 
Da_Killa_Kid's Avatar
 
Posts: 546
Joined: Oct 2003
From: Co. Springs
Status: Offline
IP: 2D77 6E2A

your fuckin wordplay was bangin. the punches hit and the structure was on point keep that shit up dog.

Holla at em
__________________
<marquee>FUCK YOU!!! YEAH YOU BITCH</marquee>

<center> </center>
slept on battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105181
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113861
Send a message via Yahoo to Da_Killa_Kid   Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-03, 01:29 PM   #10
LoCo
This is my first post!
 
LoCo's Avatar
 
Joined: Oct 2003
From: Chi-Town 616 HOLLA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 8DF2 C8AD

thanks for reps
__________________
Reppin NUCLEAR CONCEPTS


Grimey - Records
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-03, 01:38 PM   #11
WORD~PERFECT
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 19AF 50C1

this was hot twin needs a little work but hey thats why we post to elivate i thought you were mia damn twin yo get with spike i want to see how you both collab togeather i think yall would come ill
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-03, 02:29 PM   #12
Gunman tha Great
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 4287 3F49

honestly, i stopped reading tha shit on "i roll 30 deep to blockbuster to get movies" line, can't be too dope if you decided to type that shit in.
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-03, 02:47 PM   #13
SiMpLeE-Ill
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: A401 0F0D

ya w-p was nice
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-03, 02:50 PM   #14
Tsar Casm
Over Weight
 
Tsar Casm's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,488
Joined: Apr 2003
From: tapdancin' on lava
Status: Offline
IP: 4577 CD9A

Quote:
Originally posted by Gunman tha Great
honestly, i stopped reading tha shit on "i roll 30 deep to blockbuster to get movies" line, can't be too dope if you decided to type that shit in.


Amen, are u sure this isn't SuK WiT iT pt 2???? really, dropp the gangsta image, it dont work on the net, to help u elevate, don't listen to anyother post before this one. Just go back to the drawing board
__________________

Soft Focus
Suicide Inc.
RhymeVantage
Def.Ill
Ghost-Writers

Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
Send a message via AIM to Tsar Casm   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:03 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.