10 lines, due 30 minutes after u check in, crew votes allowed.
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sorry blood but i cant......
its 3am here in England and
am going bed....
I pm'd ya hours ago...
this is my check in tho
Extend till 2moz plz...
get at me on aim also
Aim=PsDetained

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

Fuck it, i'm on fire tonight don't wanna fuck that up so i'll drop right now might take a lil while cuz I gotta make sure it's nice and dope since i'm versin you.
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Detained? Ya Cords'll Be In Pain When I Rip U Vocally And Morally..
Must Be A Toothe Paste Salesman How You Give Out So Much Oral B..
U joined two weeks ago and u think ur flow can match up to a vet?..
Feeble koed u but u wanna battle me I leave more tears then sweat..
Ur not even in elite yet...i'll leave it up to you to know your chances..
Crew battles?? looks like it's our crew that Detained fancy's..
It's the truth losin to walter wall’s proof, only wins u get is when kickin ur pet..
Vet status..at best average no need for a bid in this battle, the execs are makin the bet..
You've got stealth?....hmm...well who'd ya steal it from?..
--------------- < insert ya filler line there, bid's raps equal helium..

Fuck two of the links din't work damn I gotta post em up manually lol, this makes me look like a retard, "leave it up to you to know your chances" last post in thread ----------> http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98306

"it's our crew that detained fancy's" third post down, noticed a problem in our crew thread before he was a member in our crew -------------> http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97533

Damn this took awhile, waste of time, goodluck bid.
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Don't get Wordplay??..Well fuck you..Dont Vote lol

Eye is jus another Pupil in Line..Guess ya cud call it an Eye Que..
..i'm asking Token all the time...."why du keep Eye in the Crew?"
coz just look straight at his name..he brings nuttin but Shame..
..his I.Q enters the Minuses..so he gives Einstein the Blame..(ava)
I see my name in ya sig and Cringe everytime..killin my Reputation
tries to copy Pac w/ his Ava..but you're jus a Ja Rule Wax Imitation
b/coz this Dummy is on standby..wen Herbs be Buggin the Execs
..we only giv him Wack assignments..as a sign of Disrespect
but wen all is said and Done..you're still Deaf, Dumb and Blind..
..you be the Eye n I'll be the Cataract coz I can't see you Behind!

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

Haha.. Crew members goin at it.. ight break down

Punches- B.I. Detained (hard)
Personals- B.I. Detained (those were some harsh personals.. nice)
Flow- Eye
Metas- B.I.
Wordplay- B.I.

Vote- B.I.

Good job both you..
Eye.. Get more clever and use more wordplay..

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

Nice battle...

opening - Detained
Punches- Detained
Personals- Both had alot bt Detained hit harder
Flow- Detained
Metas- Detained
Multis - Eye
Wordplay- Detained
closing - tie...
my vote - B.I.

Favorite Lines From B.I.

but wen all is said and Done..you're still Deaf, Dumb and Blind..
..you be the Eye n I'll be the Cataract coz I can't see you Behind!

Favorite Lines From EyE

It's the truth losin to walter wall’s proof, only wins u get is when kickin ur pet..
Vet status..at best average no need for a bid in this battle, the execs are makin the bet..

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EyE QuE hit up the battle in my sig and drop an honest vote...thanks for hittin it up B.I.

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This was a nice lookin battle right here...

Punches - B.I.
Personals - B.I.
Flow - Tie
Wordplay - B.I.
Meta's - B.I.
Vote - B.I.

- This was a good battle, But B.I is ganna take this with personls. ( dont know if my vote will work yet, so im ganna up it )

^ UPPIN ^

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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good lord...eye retire please...lol jk

opener retained
closer retained
punches retained DAMN!!!!
personals retained OUCH!!!!!!!!
wordplay eyeque...come on he has to get one of these
overal retained...shit was fucking mean seriously someone might commit suicide tonight...lmao

peace

Lol damn iight, I thought I did good but I guess I came average this is makin me look bad dammit now i got a 3 - 1 record need some more wins after this, gotta go battle the herb vets like aragorn and doi members.
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